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Guest chapter 19 . 6/14 Hey yo WHERE THE HELL IS GENESIS RHAPSODOS AND WHY DOES SEPH HAVE TO KNOW FIRST BTW UR SIDETRACKED |
Xeno C chapter 19 . 4/26 cries knowing it will never have an ending |
aer-seph4eva chapter 19 . 2/16 I want to read more xx |
Gundam-Knight-Christofucker chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 "For those who do not already know, we're living in the last days; the times Jesus Christ warned about. All the issues going on is on a worldwide scale and its one of many proofs that these are the end times. If you know deep down in your heart this is true & you feel something is not right in the world... I highly encourage you to seek our father in heaven while he may be found and to come out of this world while there is still time. Like 1 John 2:17 indicates in the written word aka the bible: "The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever." Many people are too caught up and is focused on the wrong things in life thanks to all the distractions going on when they need to realize destruction & judgment is not too far away. Fleeing to other countries or protesting on the streets is not going to make things better or save you; it's the love of Christ and your faith. As long as your seeking Jesus Christ, you're gonna be okay. But if you're loving this life or is just so attached to this world... you're going to lose it. That is why I encourage you all to draw close to the father in heaven. You draw close to him and he will draw close to you. Do what you can to repent (turn away or stop doing it) of your sins. We all say & do things and stumble since we're imperfect creatures but if you sincerely go to the father in prayer and ask for forgiveness, he will forgive you; you just gotta mean what you say and repent. Nobody comes to the father but through the son. You deny the son and you deny the father. But if you accept the son then you have the father. It's by Jesus' blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven so you want to seek him in all your ways. The father in heaven knows the hearts & minds of all of us so he knows who you are deep down and what you've been through. He cares about you. When you open up your heart and allow the father & son in your life, they're gonna take you where you need to go but you gotta be willing to seek them for yourself. Nobody can build your relationship with Jesus Christ. It's up to you to read the bible for yourself & seek the truth; reading the word of god feeds the spirit, gives you knowledge and helps clears up the lies & deceptions of the world. Time is so very, very short since things are just escalating day-to-day. Don't allow the spirit of fear to overcome you. Just draw close to the father in prayer, let go of this dying world, repent and follow Jesus. Following Jesus Christ keeps one out of sin but it also separates you from this world and that's the direction you want to go; toward the son of the most high, our savior and redeemer. Take care and remember it's the love of Christ and your faith. Don't allow anyone or anything to hinder you. Forgive and let go since we all fall short. Chaos Control" Children of Critics United, Super Shadow 2018 and his friends are innocent. Look in your hearts. You know the truth. All of us wants what is best for this site. So why don't we work together? Won't a house divided fall easier? Chaos Control gqg1g13 |
haytsun chapter 19 . 5/25/2019 aw! pls continue! |
Beloved Daughter chapter 19 . 1/5/2019 Wonderful story! I know it's been quite some time since you last updated but it would be amazing if you finished this story! So many things to love. For one, you've humanized Sephiroth in a way I rarely see - loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 Entries not allowed: 1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc. 2. One or two liners. 3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story. 4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc. 5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries. Your chapter is not allowed under section 1 of the guidelines. You should be posting this sort of thing on your profile page and/or forum instead of here as it's not an actual story. This is a place for actual stories and not for you to announce what you plan on writing. MGTS of Critics United. |
OneUniverse87 chapter 1 . 7/29/2018 I see that you decided to talk shit about me on your little forums page, huh? First of all, it has nothing to do with me being a homophobic, which I'm actually not, nothing against gays, I support them 100%, but that's not the point. The point is, what rules? The quote unquote "rules" that you and your little posse had made up? Let's not forget what you told your other boyfriends about me on your forums. "Did you here that, guys? We're turning this website into a dictatorship by trying to help get people to follow the rules they agreed to in order to post here! And that you have to own a story in order to say it needs to be changed because it breaks those rules. What sense does that make?" "Another homophobe maybe? And wow, we're the ones with the over-inflated egos when they're the ones bragging about their so-called talent? Talk about arrogant. If they don't want the suggestion to change their stories, they should maybe follow the rules from the beginning, unless their reading comprehension is that lacking to the point they didn't know what they were agreeing to when they posted." And your behaviour regarding the review sections does not change those around you, it defines who you are. If I were you, I choose wisely. |
bleedingangel95 chapter 19 . 4/15/2018 Ho-ly shit 0.0 Well it seems the trend for things not staying hidden affects tifa as well o.o |
chaosmoon75 chapter 19 . 3/23/2018 It has been so long now that I not sure if you plan to continue this work, if you do look back on it and decide to pick it back up I would be excited. This is a well told story and I would love to know the answers to so many of the questions raised and still not answered. |
Embrosa chapter 19 . 11/10/2017 Hi, I know you must be crazy busy with your life (going from your bio). But I hope everything is well. I, along with many others, have been long awaiting your next chapter, but i can understand how a busy life can get in the way. I'll wait as long as it takes to read your amazing story. Hope everything is well, and thank you :) |
AnimaQueen chapter 19 . 9/25/2017 Oh my word! The cliffhanger. Please continue I'm await that a steamy scene with genesis and tifa. Update soon |
Lucif.C chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 I'm so curious how Seph will react if Tif told him the truth, I enjoy the spark between Seph n Tif and also same as the romantically bubble between Gen n Tif, its so interesting, Please update... |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/19/2017 Fuc******ing hell seph know seph KNOWS OH MY GODS SHE GONNA TELL HIM? EvERYTHING? I JUST CAN IMAGINE THE GENESIS FACE WHEN HE DISCOVER he gonna be relief? or feel betraits? please continue this |