Great story I really liked it good please continue it soon.

Well then your breaking your own rule #2 because you have Ranma who was so hung up with his male side falling for P-Chan way to fast regardless if the child is actually his or not. So yes you are doing yoai as you claim you wouldn’t do ever.

I don’t have a problem with Ranma being trapped as a girl I have a problem with Ranma getting romantically paired with P-Chan. Or any guy for that matter and for to be almost instant that she is automatically into guys when she’s a girl.

hmmm, I was wondering about the next chapter and here we are. You did an interesting job and I look forward to the next one. Keep it up.

thank you for the update

This is pretty cool, I can't wait to see where it goes. Please update soon.

the centering everything for the whole chapter is annoying to read

you seriously need to fix the formatting, the centered text is really annoying, place the text to the left

Seriously I keep trying to read this but I can't get past the first couple lines and in the reviews people tell you the same thing I'm going to:

STOP, CENTERING, YOUR, FRICKING, FICS!

Put this into left alignment so that it's actually readable to people, I'm sure it's a good if not decent story from the reviews I read of people who can get over the freaking alignment thing but you need to go through and uncenter the story so it's in left alignment. If you're constantly getting comments about how this is turning people off of this fic then you really should go and fix it so more people will read it. 21 chapters and it's center alignment all the way through as are most of your stories. Look it may look good to you and that's great but if you're posting this for others to enjoy besides yourself then you really need to fix the alignment issue you have so that others can read them without going nuts.

by the gods, please come back and fix the damn structure , the centering is so damn disorienting this is illegible to me.

Wait but I thought the curses were reversed when they arrived? When Ranma and Ryouga fell inti one spring, Ryouga came out in his pig form while Ranma was male again, then they fell into the second spring, and Ryouga was human and Ranma was in his cursed body... unless its the lockets trapping Ranma in his cursed body when Ryouga is in human form...

Hi thank you or your story, so Please more Chapters. -

Spent all of five minutes putting the chapter into Google Docs(free and awesome), setting a Left Alignment, parsing paragraphs, and fixing grammar errors shown. So much easier to read like that.

The story itself isn't so bad. A few reactions and wordings could be fixed, but the plot is decent and intriguing.

I could point out a several mistakes, but I'll point out the bigger ones I guess. When you're writing, make sure you keep an order. Who, what, when, where, why. Who is it talking about? What happened and in what order? While you're writing, make sure you write expressions or actions in the order that they're expected.

Don't talk about something that has an action or explanation stated afterwards. And vice versa. Also, there's no reason to repeat what is said. If you have a character thinking they're strong, you don't need to have it thought or stated outright in the next sentence. If you absolutely much, reword it enough that it doesn't feel the same.

And lastly, WHY would Konoha make a bingo book file on their own shinobi? OH, we have a strong shinboi! We should tell everyone! Because that's what assasins do! Broadcast their skills and how powerful they are! ...Yea, there's sarcasm in there.

Sorry for that, but it just seems utterly ridiculous that I just felt saying so. As a shinobi, I doubt they would even keep files on their own ninja - too easy for information to become known through spies or something. Maybe vague knowledge on overall skills and specialties for assignment purposes, but nothing more.

Anyways, I hope this helps some

Definitely need to change this to left alignment.
I think a fix like that is worth more than an update

Your alignment is a major turnoff from your story.
It might not really be all to much worse to read, but it does turn into a major annoyance for people who read 99% of stories left aligned. Honestly, it's the simplest things that kill reader interest - formatting, syntax, grammar. If a story is missing commas, sentences turn into something that need slightly more thought to decipher, which turns readers off. 'Said', 'Continued', and similar in every instance a person talks would be another. They just kill the mood of the story. Having your starting place in each line constantly changing is only for short work - banners, ads, etc.

If the story interests me for more than two or three chapters, I'll likely just copy and paste it into a reader or something.