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nice story, but personally I would like some romance.

Bit of an interesting twist for the ending. I have no objections. Good story, overall.

Also, listen to your muse. Not all of us are lucky enough to have active ones. Mine pops awake every few months or so to give me more ideas than motivation.

Wow, Poor Lisa, and kinda poor Raven and Lisa's old family. But what I think I find to be the most intriguing aspect of this is tied between two things. How Lisa and Raven will get along, and what will happen when someone with the appropriate level of power TO notice DOES notice what Raven has done. It would be a very dangerous thing for someone to recognize what she's done, if they don't have enough power to know why. It takes Raven from being a benign being to a literal soul taking demon.

Hmm, Nightwing was surprisingly okay with that. Also, you left out all the details of their intimacy.

Interesting direction. I know not all of your stories involving relationships are of the fluffy variety, but this feels different.

Sort of like they both entered into an abusive relationship, knowing, but still willing.

While Raven CHOOSES to be a good person, despite her instincts and natural inclination, that doesn't remove those instincts or inclination. Now Terra's convinced her to embrace (and magically enhance) part of it. If she can't repress or deny this part of herself anymore, can she learn to manage it in a healthy non-Silence-of-the-Lambs sort of way?

What about Lisa? How's she going to deal with this? Being willing to give up everything for someone you love is one thing, living with it the rest of your life is another.

She's just sold herself as a fuck-slave to someone who - self admittedly - may not treat her as well as either of them would like. It would be only human to develop some resentment there.

Add in the fact that Raven just got her first cultist. Sworn, oath bound, soul pledged. The works. What sort of effect would that have on her? While I doubt the worship of a single cultist would have a massive effect by itself, would it make her want more?

Would she feel that little trickle of power from the worship of her cultist and be tempted? More cultists. More power.

Then there's the reaction of the Titans/League/other groups if they figure out the details of their relationship.

Damn, I can't believe you marked this as complete. This story has so many possibilities for continuation.

This story was amazing. I really liked how Lisa took care of Slade. If only Robin had though of that when the others had the nanites, it would have saved them a heap of trouble. I also like Lisa's determination to save her mother. She realizes that she will lose the very thing she's always wanted but decides to be selfless in order to save her mother's life. Very well done.

This Is Great. I've Read Some Of Your Other Works. I've Been Meaning To Leave Reviews, But It Just Slips My Mind. Heh... Sorry About That. I've Always Liked Your Fics. I Love Jinx And Rae Together And I'm A Sucker For Long Stories. There Aren't Really That Many Other Authors Who Write Lengthy Rae And Jinx Fics Sadly. But Anyway, I Love This Story. I Like To See Raven With Terra, Jinx Too, But Terra Is Just So Uncommon, That It Feels Fresh. I've Always Felt Raven Liked Women For Some Reason. I've Tried Reading Some Raven And Beast Boy Pairings But, They Never Really Interested Me. Sorry I've Started Rambling Again. I Would Love To See What You Do With This. Thank You For The Great Chapters. I'll Be On The Look Out For More Of These

Unexpected but pretty good. Hope your muse bugs the crap outta you. Would love some more of this.

That ended...very differently from what I expected when I first read this. Still very nice and opens room for new possibilities.

O-kay! Well, this is certainly a novel approach to Terra joining the team. I really didn't see it coming. And I was looking for it.

Does this mean that "Terra's" history begins here and now? No lost princess of Markovia, no brother named Brion / Geoforce?

Hey, as long as Terra's on the team, I'm sure not complaining! An outstanding and, to me, completely unpredictable story!

Well, wasn't this was completely out of the left field? And in all ways, just not necessarily the bad ones. Honestly, I had to reread Chapter 3 to refresh my memory before tucking into this. I'll say this much: for an unanticipated new chapter, it was very much worth the wait.

It's an interesting new direction you've taken, here, and all kinds of unexpected. When I realised exactly what it was that Lisa was asking, I honestly didn't think Raven would take her up on it. Granted, there was great reluctance on her part, and the cost is something pretty wow, but I have to give it to Lisa, kid's got some determination - but then, that's a question we all ask ourselves at some point, isn't it? "What would I give, to save the people I love most?" It's certainly not the first time she's given her life, one way or another... I guess "Once bitten, twice shy" has some exceptions, huh. It's tragic that this is what that answer costs her, but I guess at the same time, it's also not; she'll start again (again), and maybe this time, with Raven watching over her, she'll get it right.

I await further additions, however unexpected, with great curiosity. Keep up the good work, friend.

Wow. Pretty amazing and ironclad way to rehabilitate Terra and get her back on the Titans.
Thanks

I, for one, REALLY REALLY hope there's a sequel to this. Like specifically one that explores this new relationship. Raven/Terra is woefully underrepresented in the fanfiction community, in my opinion.