Nice update , I really enjoyed this fiction , I love your work I can't wait for new chapters

Great new chapter man , poor toph :'(

Just found out about your fiction and read it all it was very good keep up the good work

Omg I can't believe you updated this I was wondering whether you'll ever update it man the new chapter is rocking it its great love the way its going keep up the good work

That was definitely a good fiction
continue please

Fun story I like your take on serpents pass
Hope u update soon its getting good
Thanks

Great story hope there is an update soon but if not that's okay your story is great.

More. I need more Tokka now since I watched the angering episodes of Book 3 of LOK.

New to this story. I'm really enjoying it. You've got a quality buddy adventure going on here.
Thanks for writing.

well did toph ?
nice story.. u know for some reason i hope no guys except sokka do."something" to her.. so i hope..
weird isnt it xD
anyway i am waiting your .. update soon..
thanks the story

I'm loving this story so far! :) update when you can :)))

An interesting read. I like it so far and look forward to more.

Ahh! As soon as I read the Dog Days quote, I was like 'yeah, I'm gonna be following this'.

I think you have a really good plot happening, and I can't wait to see how it goes. I noticed a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing serious. I think you missed a period somewhere, and you spelled 'Katara' as 'Ktara', but it doesn't really matter. I also like how you posted a new Tokka fic on the first day of Taang week ;)

Keep writing!