| Reviews for Rise of the emerald archer |
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   white collar black wolf chapter 2 . 6/18/2019 Awesome story really hope you can continue it |
| ashton millman chapter 2 . 8/27/2018 dude what happened keep this story going it's incredible |
| ArthurShade chapter 2 . 10/31/2015 Interesting |
| ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 2 . 11/3/2014 Ooooh I love it soooo much keep going |
| Finnish Paragade chapter 2 . 6/29/2014 And you haven't updated this wonderful story? WHY? |
| devin.conway.16 chapter 2 . 9/4/2013 Hope read more of this story soon! |
| jennifer chapter 2 . 8/16/2013 awesome story I love it I really really like it please post another chapter soon want to keep on reading it thank you for an amazing story please continue it |
| YueShadow chapter 2 . 7/18/2013 I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| XMatchBookX chapter 2 . 7/10/2013 Holy fuckin' shit man! I live this story! You have to right amount of suspense that it pulls you right in and doesn't seem forced at all. There's also mystery, and a good amount of angst that's not overbearing. Im loving Lily and James. And your Dumbledore is pretty much how I look at the actual Dumbledore. Fuckin old man. I literally can't wait til you post the next chapter! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2013 Great story I love the direction your going with it green arrow is my fav hero too |
| HARRYSEX chapter 2 . 7/6/2013 VERY GOOD. |
| Melikalilly chapter 2 . 7/3/2013 I like this story |
| Penny is wise chapter 2 . 7/3/2013 Awesome chapter. |
| ww1990ww chapter 2 . 7/1/2013 Well this story has a hell of potential but i think you should consider rewrite this chapter. You wan't to create manipulative Dumbledore but this is an idiotic Dumbledore not a manipulative. Next i'am not an comic ortodox but Bruce Wayne who is not a Batman is well strange think. I sugest that you start from making Harry go the same way with go Olivier in Arrow later adding element's from Smalvile and another parths of DC universe later Harry Potter universe and in the put elements from Marvel. But whatever you do I still will be reading this story. |
| TheMuffinMan968 chapter 2 . 7/1/2013 Ok this is pretty good but you shouldn't make your paragraphs so long. They are big walls of words that are hard to read and will turn a lot of readers away from the story. Some readers can be really uptight about things like that. If a paragraph is more than 3-5 sentences then it should be broken up into different paragraphs. I admit I almost passed this by just due to the extremely long walls of words you have here but I was interested in the concept. When you have someone talk, don't place it within the paragraph you are writing. That gets just plain annoying to read and again a lot of readers will not want to read a story where whole conversations are held in a single paragraph. When a person speaks or a conversation is starting they need to have their own lines of talk. For example "Hi my name is Bob" "Hello Bob it's nice to meet you. I'm Bobby" I hope that you continue this and that your writing improves! I will be looking out for this in the future. |
