This was amazing I hope to see an ending someday! My fave of the ROTG fan fictions. so detailed and well written

I loved this story and hope you get around to writing more chapters someday!

GIVE ME MORE. Seriously, this is so fricken interesting, i love everything about this fic and how it drew me in. can't wait for more XD

Please, please, please update! It is so hard to find a good 'Jack Frost joins Pitch Black' fanfic, and this one seems so well done. Everyone seems in character and I desperately want to see a protective Pitch Black! Granted, I know it's been four years since you've updated, but I can hope! Please keep writing, and God Bless.

ADD MORE PLEASE! I'M HOOKED!

This is a really intriguing story. I like it a lot. Please update! I want to see more of the night Terrors and fatherly(?) Pitch. What I would really like to see is Pitch talking to the Guardians (for some reason) while Jack is sleeping in another room when Jack gets a nightmare (but Pitch didn't give it to him) and Pitch and the guardians hear muffled screams, Pitch realizes what's happening and races to wake him up before a Night Terror is created, the Guardians are surprised that Pitch would try to stop someone from having a nightmare. They arrive in time to see the Night Terror starting to form and it attempts to attack them (It's still not fully there though), the guardians fight in while Pitch wakes up Jack and the Night Terror dissolves when Jack wakes up. Bonus if Pitch comforts Jack after he wakes up.

intriguing! write on.

oh darn. and damn...

*runs away and hides beneath the blankets.*
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*shivers*
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*pops head out from blankets**glares at closet*
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*pulls out grenade and chucks it towards the closet*

FUCK YOU ONION-CUTTING NINJAS! MUAAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!

This is sad but truly very interesting to read; please update soon

I hope the other guardians especially bunny will feel Jack's wrath

three years? THREE YEARS i've been waitin but i've lost pataints WHEN THE $#% ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?! i loved (past tense) this story it's just been ruined for me by the wait can you please just update it so i can be at peace again?

I think the night terror should have been a Knight Terror; a knight of darkness on top of a nightmare. Nightmare is a play on words, so shouldn't the Knight terror be as well. Plus I can't really see a horse turning into a blood thirsty wolf.

Great story and I like the concept of it! I'll keep reading!
~Aqua

Love the story. I love the relationship between Jack and Pitch, I've always wanted to find a genuinely good 'dark' Jack story and it seems I've found it.

Hahahaha! I'm sssoooo sorry but I think this is funny and bunny I am happy no one belives in you! How could you hit Jack!? I bitt Sandy would have kick your butt if he seen you do that! BTW good story!