Reviews for The Phoenix
Guest chapter 35 . 5/19
Actually Toph... drugging Zuko and kidnapping him away on this journey while he was drunk makes you and Sokka HORRIBLE people.
Guest chapter 34 . 5/19
I always feel like people miss the point with the 'letting go of attachments' idea... if you're, say, a firefighter and you're on shift when your kid gets hurt then, baring emergency shift swapping, you're kinda stuck... or if you're a soldier stationed out of the country when your kid is born, it sucks but you don't have a lot of options... and I thought you were kinda edging into that kind of understanding. Yes, Aang can have a family, yes he can love a wife and kids... but he has to always be the avatar first and his duties there must supersede the needs of his family... then you pulled out the line about him feeling like he made a mistake...
Mugen Kagemaru chapter 46 . 10/6/2019
Missing Ursa's reunion with Azula. It really did seem like she needed it too.
Mistress DragonFlame chapter 41 . 3/17/2019
Steam powered ships are coal powered ships. Modern Carriers are nuke powered steam ships, but a lot of the smaller ones are diesel powered steam ships.

Fuel is still required to have steam power.
PoeticMoonSpirit chapter 46 . 12/22/2018
Why didn't you include The Southern Raiders? I know this is canon-divergence, but I'm curious.
Znkp chapter 4 . 7/27/2017
Poor zuko
Finally found his name
Yeeees
Maeby16 chapter 27 . 6/30/2017
That came from harry potter lol
Kimmytrainer chapter 46 . 5/1/2017
Hmm I suppose I can be okay with that ending. That was super dramatic and it brought tears to my eyes! I'm so happy she came back. Katara's lessons were amusing lol just as a side note. Anyway I loved this story so much! Thanks for writing :D
Kimmytrainer chapter 45 . 5/1/2017
Yay they're engaged! Only one chapter left!
Kimmytrainer chapter 44 . 5/1/2017
WTF HE JUST BURNED A PERSON TO ASHES BY HOLDING THEM AROUND THE THROAT WITH ONE HAND! WTF THAT IS SO NOT LIKE ZUKO WHAT HAPPENED
Kimmytrainer chapter 43 . 5/1/2017
Very unwise, Zuko, not telling Katara about the attempts on your life. That's a way to die sooner.
Kimmytrainer chapter 42 . 5/1/2017
Eeeeeeeeeeeeep
Kimmytrainer chapter 41 . 5/1/2017
Is the next chapter a time skip? I don't know if I want it to be or not lol
Kimmytrainer chapter 40 . 5/1/2017
Whew well that part's over with! Excited to see what the rest will be :)
Kimmytrainer chapter 39 . 5/1/2017
Whoa it's like Avatar State Zuko Phoenix style!
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