Reviews for Bitter Sugar
raccoonbat chapter 7 . 2/10/2016
I do not find this story at all boring or too long, in fact it feels to short. As I enjoy every moment in reading it. I love the development, intrigue and mystery. It feels like its going at a very natural and alluring pace. That makes it exciting and leaves you wanting more. I love the cute 'what am I feeling' from bonnie and just the whole tiny bud of a romance. But it not being rushed and balanced with action too. I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic, I hope you and your health are doing fine that maybe you will come back to this fic one day. Cause I'm definitely on the edge of my seat and holding my breath for what's next. Thank you so much for bringing us this far with your wonderful writing!
CassAnon chapter 7 . 1/16/2016
I'm kind of saddened by the idea that this story wasn't updated anymore. I mean the last update was in 2014 and I just read it and it was so beautiful, so wonderful, so awesome, so cool and so on that I could cry because of that. For me, your fic is not boring it was intriguing. Intriguing in a way that your plot is way more different and way more organize and clean than others and that is why the story is so appealing to me. So wherever you are, if you are still here in fanfiction, please continue. You don't know how many people would be so happy if you will really update your story. I really really like the way you write, your sequence of events and how the story will and would go. Thank you. Long live Bubbline. Hahaha. XD
ApplesauceAuthor chapter 7 . 9/22/2015
Oooh yoooou gay ass dorks. Always assuming the other isn't thinking THE EXACT SAME THING YOU ARE. uuuuugh.
But anways...
THIS WAS PRETTY FRICKIN AWESOME AND IT WOULD BE A IF U CONTINUED DOING IT AUTHOR THANKS FOR UR STORY.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
there is nothing boring about this, i appreciate the slow development please continue
Lecoj03 chapter 7 . 7/15/2015
Dude you should really UPDATE! I love how the plot started with Marcy and Bonnie. I hope you could get back to this fic again! Well good luck and PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! Bye bye
TheNightstriker chapter 7 . 6/11/2015
I wanna see some action! Judo flips punching and that stuff ya know? Great story hope ya update soon :D
harune123 chapter 7 . 6/4/2015
i'm not a fan of politics because it's mostly all about image. please update soon. i would really want to know how this couple will get through this.
IvorySea chapter 7 . 5/7/2015
I love this story. It flows very well and I like how you've kept the characters, it's great! I'm curious to see how this story and their relationship develops. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
ErluFanatic chapter 7 . 4/26/2015
Please continue this story T_T its so awesome!?
Guest chapter 7 . 4/16/2015
LIVE DAMN YOU, LIIIIIIIIIVE!
ChemGod chapter 7 . 3/26/2015
Please continue writing this, I am hooked :)
Chemistry God chapter 5 . 3/26/2015
Marshall and Gumball are in cahoots together!
Chemistry God chapter 2 . 3/26/2015
Wowza. I favorited this story without reading it (with intentions to read it later, but I must have forogotten) and now that I am reading it, I am so very impressed! I love this. It is amazing!
dayant.arroyo chapter 7 . 2/13/2015
I really wish that you would continue this story. i has such a great plot, I'd hate for you to not finish it.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/17/2015
This. I need more of this in my life! Can't wait for an update !
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