Im sooooo sorry I'm late
I kind of gave up on fan fiction for a bit
Had to come back to finish this
Brilliant ending
Didnt see it coming
But sadly ...little detectice work
I reallly enjoyed that bit in the last one
Now I'm off
Good bye my favorite fan fiction writer
Your friend
Momin shahab

*applauds* Bravo! Wonderful job on the second McLaggen installment. I had plenty of fun and giggles reading it. :D

A cliffhanger! NOOOO! I love this chapter!

Awww man
I was all happy to finally see mclaggen get some
Ah well we cant all be winners
Now this was a good chapter
Sorry I was late in reviewing it
It was bacause ...ummm
I have no excuse
It was because I was lazy and I was fasting
Thats about it
MOMIN IS OUT

This just keeps on getting better!
Poisonous lipstick!
Get me one of those!
Nice McLaggen: "Explodo!"
Lol...
UPDATE SOON!

Purr,
NYAN KITTY

He really takes his reverse psychology seriously, doesn't he? :)

Dun dun dun!
Omg this hilarious!
Keep going!

Purr, (if you catch my drift lol jk)
NYAN KITTY

I am so sorry it took me so long to review to this story
It isnt as good as the previous one
But its still damn good
Ive been reading it on my phone
With which I can not review
But that problems fixed
And we can be united once more

Only slightly less attractive? XD Your McLaggen chapters are always good reads.

*giggles* You're as brilliant as always.

I like this

You gotta love McLaggen. He's such an optimist. A sleazy one, but still. XD

Quite possibly the funniest thing I've ever read!