| Reviews for Roman de la Rivality |
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HeadBandHalo chapter 6 . 4/9 Easily the most well-written Jimmy Neutron fan-fic I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading on this site. You madam, are a gosh darn angelic poet! Thank you for fulfilling my heart with this J/C goodness |
woofyy chapter 6 . 6/9/2019 Awwww it's a very cute story. I'm glad Jimmy finally realized he lives Cindy. Good luck with your future stories. I hope you'll write more about this couple. |
Dreamwalker44 chapter 6 . 5/25/2019 The thing about quarks in chapter 2, it made me remeber a line regarding Artemis Fowl and Minerva (it was one of my favorite lines from the book). My apologies if it's unrelated. But, more importantly, this storyI absolutely love it. There was tension and sweetness between the two of them. Illogical but full of compassion. I didnt know if I would swoon or be frustrated from what was happening. It was romantic irony and I loved every bit of it. |
2178577 chapter 1 . 10/25/2017 *great omg I can't write |
2178577 chapter 6 . 10/24/2017 I cant remember if I reviewed this before so I'll just review it now. create story |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 6 . 9/30/2017 I am so glad I decided to go back and re-read some of my favorites this morning. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 5 . 9/30/2017 Only if you sing With Cat Like Tread, that'll guarantee No one hears you sing in the shower. I really, really wish someone would remind Jimmy that he has, at the very least, three different Time machines, all of which can get around any loops or paradoxes to alter history or the future. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 2 . 9/29/2017 As a nerdgeek that was propositioned to 3-4 times before I deciphered female social cues, and then still twice more after that (none of them accepted of course), I can totally believe that Jimmy was probably asked to come over and help a girl or three "study", but actually was prepared to study (bringing a clipboard with a checklist of topics, since checklists are awesome) and was dissapointed at the girls lack of educational enthusiasm. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 1 . 9/29/2017 Re-reading this...I hate just how RIGHT Jimmy is about the state of Literature studies these days. Any grading style where you have to have the correct opinion on something (a way of thinking or feeling) in order to receive an objective measurement (a way of being or ability) of success should be removed from the system. |
K.T.Waterflower chapter 6 . 9/20/2017 Oh this was such an amazing story, all the characters were acting almost spot on in each situation and this was hilarious especially the part with the goat. I love the romance you put for Jimmy and Cindy it's was so cute, sweet, funny and so like them. Faves! |
xxcandylover23xx chapter 6 . 12/21/2016 This is going to my ever growing list. So cute |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 6 . 5/30/2016 "that morning a flaming portal to hell could have opened up in his front yard, and he still would have been up to his elbows in wires and gears in the lab, with only the barest passing thought given to the sudden spike in temperature and sounds of wailing and gnashing teeth outside." Meh, I'm sure it's nothing. "Libby rolled her eyes and laughed. "Cin, seriously," she said. "We both know that boy is as clueless as they come. You ask a question like that, you've gotta ask yourself if he's got the social savvy to fake it." I also burst out laughing, because wow... "And I haven't?" she challenged. "The boy I love stood me up on Valentine's Day and managed to say that he loves me before I could say that I love him and he is absolutely going to lord that over me for the rest of our lives." "Did someone say Ultra Lord?" "Sheeen! I swear if you get us caught spying on them!" "Guys, I think the goat is chewing on my pants..." |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 5 . 5/30/2016 "no, their minds had not been liquefied and replaced by some kind of sentient alien brain slugs" Poor brain slugs never get any love. "And Logic had gotten him an A-minus on this one, so it could just go sit in the corner and think about what it had done as far as he was concerned." Aah, hilarious. "Can I do The Pirates of Penzance" Only if you sing "with Cat-Like Tread". "This can not possibly go wrong." Said the reader hoping it would go wrong in the most humorous ways possible. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/30/2016 She scanned the page briefly and began reading. "'One of the major elements to the medieval poetic style is a careful itemization of the beauty of the desired object, or n. In this the poets at hand derive a rather simplistic mode of solving for the degree of desired lightness in the eyes of n (our example shall of course utilize the standard universal notation of c for light), which may be written as follows…'" She stopped reading and stared at him, incredulous. "And you really turned this in, huh." Oh man, that's just great. I can't even tell you how completely amusing this is. -TheOneWhoReadsTooMuch |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 4 . 5/30/2016 She scanned the page briefly and began reading. "'One of the major elements to the medieval poetic style is a careful itemization of the beauty of the desired object, or n. In this the poets at hand derive a rather simplistic mode of solving for the degree of desired lightness in the eyes of n (our example shall of course utilize the standard universal notation of c for light), which may be written as follows…'" She stopped reading and stared at him, incredulous. "And you really turned this in, huh." Oh man, that's just great. I can't even tell you how completely amusing this is. |