Hello !
I just finished watching ao haru ride (and didn't read the Manga yet) and your fanfiction is the first one I read till the very end. I'm generally not fan of teacher and student relationships but we can say that Murao and Tanaka are an exception. Maybe that's because I love both of them.
Anyway, your fanfic was great ! I loved your style of writing, it was so realistic. And the end was so beautiful. The comparison between their relationship and the classical one (like Kou and Futaba's) was my favourite part, I guess.
Keep going ! And thanks for writing something like that :D

This was so good, I really enjoyed reading it. I think you wrote both characters really well, which can be hard, but the entire thing was written well!

This was so beautiful and full of hope it warmed my heart.
Exquisitely written, and like many good one-shots, leaving me wanting to read more.
Well done, you!

I think I'm in love with your writing, omg. It's so fluffy and beautiful, and it just gives me a light, airy feeling as if I really am falling in love. You depict their relationship so well: he's hot and cold and gives her hope and takes it back the next minute because of the social restraints; she just keeps on holding onto it. And I'm so glad you wrote this! It gives it a realistic outlook on how their relationship could work out, and I really hope it becomes something like this in the manga too.

There are two minor things I've noticed though. One, you tend to switch your verb tenses sometimes. Sometimes you began in a sentence in present tense, then switch onto past tense in the same sentence. Sometimes a majority of the sentences are in present tense, but one or two would be in past. It's nothing too glaringly obvious and makes me cringe, but it could be something you could work on. Another is just in your sentence, "I do. Trust me, Murao..." you have a comma after the period after "Murao." They're just small things, but good to look over it, yeah?

Anyways, I loved this story. You're wonderful, and I hope you will write more! :D

i will probably die with this ship ;_; thank you for writing something so beautiful! i love how you used both of their viewpoints, so it wasn't just murao's thoughts, or tanaka-sensei's. you've just made me fall in love with this ship more!

Wow, this was great. I love how well you captured their characters, and I think the story overall was really believable. I love the message in here, that laws don't have to stop yourself from loving who you want to love. I do think this was a bit rushed and the verb tenses were inconsistent, but this was still a lovely read. Great job. :)

uwaaa i think you got them spot on, author-san :) i liked this very much! i hope you write more about them. hee. they need more lovin

I cannot express with words how much I love your story! You captured them so well and I can't stop rereading it. I especially like how you described their different views on love at first.

I've been in her place (oh god, I'm so thankful I'm not in high school anymore- or else I'd get my hopes up again now) but my feelings were never returned, of course. (When I graduated I heard he's living together with an ex- student of his. Coughs, it's possible I guess- ladies take your chance.)

ANYWAYS BACK TO YOU,

It's beautifully written and I'm going to scroll over your profile now to check if we have more anime in common because your writing style is amazing!

Much love,

Angel

Wow!
This fic really left me sighing...
I believe in love again, because of you!

You're an awesome writer... and i'll follow you till the end, i promise you!
XOXO

This was a very good read. I enjoyed being able to travel into their throughts and see what they were thinking. It strayed away from canon which bothered me a bit but it's okay! Because side ships like Murao and Tanakas deserve much more attention and I loved the way that you portrayed this and capturing MY attention (:

Oh my God... You are so good at writing! This fanfiction is simply perfect... I'm italian, I follow Ao Haru Ride in english and I really like Shuuko's and Tanaka-sensei's relationship. I can't stop reading the 27th chapter and I don't want to believe that Tanaka-sensei rejectes her even if he loves her. I know he is a teacher and she is a student but it is an injustice... I feel like a spoilt child... Even if I haven't nothing against Kominato I will hope Shuuko and tanaka-sensei will be together till the end. I'm so sad because we actually are at the 33th and It seems like the situation between them won't change and on the other hand that she is really getting near Kominato. I hope you are feeling the same as me, I'm looking for solidarity... I appeciated your story a lot!

this is really pretty! congrats, i loved it!

Such an amazing description of their relationship. Amazing :)

hi! i really really loved this story it made me cry TTATT im a mangaka artist and ive been looking for writers and stories and i just love your writing it flows very smoothley and your words are chosen to carefully i just love it i was wondering would it be ok if i could draw this? i will give you full credit for the story of course if you want to see some of my work please check out my devieant art
thank you for the awesome read xDD it made my day keep up the good work ;9

amazing ...m still smiling :)