| Reviews for Force of the Uzumaki |
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roger9481 chapter 2 . 2/7 I don't see why you had to change the original story, this one barely makes sense with the title |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/3 Ok please stop with the whole mate thing |
SPark681 chapter 2 . 2/2 Hmm, seems things are interesting wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work! |
ncpfan chapter 2 . 2/2 I really like this story so far, but there are a couple of complaints I have. My biggest complaint is that we have no real background on what happened to cause Naruto to be living somewhere other than Konoha, and it leaves me with so many questions. The summary says he was neglected, but to what degree? Why was he neglected? Was there any verbal or emotional abuse involved? Was it intentional or unintentional? What caused Naruto to run away from home? What kinds of parents were Minato and Kushina to him? What about his siblings? When he removed his hood in the Hokage's office, none of his family reacted to him or his presence in any way except for Kira - so what exactly was his relationship with his family like? I mean, did they feel any sense of guilt or shame over having driven him away from home? Did they just disregard him as though he was a total stranger, because Kushina at least seemed to be concerned and wanted to know how he was - and yet, we're not seeing any kind of interaction or conversation between him and any of the Konoha shinobi who knew him before he left the village. So what exactly were his relationships like, and why didn't we see any hint of lingering feelings, or even gratitude or at least relief that he seemed to be healthy and living well? Could you start going into this in the next chapter, please? |
PkmntrainerCam chapter 2 . 2/2 Wouldn't she be an "aunt"? |
Dragoncyber22 chapter 2 . 2/2 A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story. |
Tensa-Zangetsu102 chapter 2 . 2/2 It's been seven years! |
Borello chapter 2 . 8/8/2018 damnit. i hoped to read more chapter. the story sounds really good. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20/2014 Well this is also interesting again haven't seen many like this one as in star wars and naruto crossovers but I have to say you are good at them so please continue this I cant wait to read more. |
The Sith'ari chapter 2 . 4/5/2014 Very good I think you should have Naruto kill all of the Uzumaki except for Sora, so she can bring back the bodies, besides the Akatsuki have to extract the Kyuubi last. |
Lawrence HBain chapter 2 . 1/5/2014 Update please update please update please update please update please update please |
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 2 . 11/29/2013 It's Deidara. |
devin.conway.16 chapter 2 . 8/1/2013 Very interesting story I hope to read more soon! :) |
Skull-'n-Crossbones chapter 2 . 7/28/2013 Just kill them already!O.o |
Skull-'n-Crossbones chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 It's 'Deirdara' not Deibara but great story :D |