Reviews for Mentalist - Cleaning up can be fun
Jisbon28 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019
Nice.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 4/28/2017
Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read
Ilovetea chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
Very sweet!
onewritergirl93 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
This is great, and the last few lines are perfect!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
wow! love it!
MentalistLover13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
I loved this! very cute and well written!
I Dream of Scotty chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Great story, I loved the fact that it was Lisbon manipulating Jane's behaviour. I also liked the idea of Red John being pushed out of plane at Jane's hands.
dadby chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
That was pretty awesome :)! I loved the fluffiness! Thanks for sharing!
Entwife Incognito chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Great first kiss!
wimmer511 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
He pushed him out of a plane? That's intriguing. Over a city? Yucky. Still, kind of like to know more about that. Cute story! I liked it when Lisbon turned from him at the beginning and the mention of turtlenecks made me chuckle. Great job!
Bethy1416 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
As to your Author's note, I forgive you ;) sometimes we have to make exceptions! And as for the story! I absolutely loved it! The banter at the beginning should definitely be the start to the scene where they finally get together! I love their playful arguments! :) you're good, you're a good writer!
Ink11 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Yay! I like it a lot, and I also like that you recognize nothing would ever happen between them if red John was still in the picture. Some people try to put them together beforehand... _ it's hard to keep these two I character sometimes, and I think the shortness of the fic helped with that, but it was also a good job on your part.
Lettersarecolours chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Not at all what I expected it to be, but wow! I really like your balancing act between funny and serious. And the kiss in the end was so much in character. Thank you.
And, thanks for putting me in your "summary" )
Hayseed Socrates chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Very cute "first kiss" scenario. I enjoyed it, and I liked that she had plotted this all along. Go Lisbon.
marshmallowdeviant chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Ah, if it could only happen just like this :) great job! x
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