| Reviews for Mentalist - Cleaning up can be fun |
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Jisbon28 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019 Nice. |
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read |
Ilovetea chapter 1 . 9/27/2016 Very sweet! |
onewritergirl93 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013 This is great, and the last few lines are perfect! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 wow! love it! |
MentalistLover13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013 I loved this! very cute and well written! |
I Dream of Scotty chapter 1 . 6/5/2013 Great story, I loved the fact that it was Lisbon manipulating Jane's behaviour. I also liked the idea of Red John being pushed out of plane at Jane's hands. |
dadby chapter 1 . 6/3/2013 That was pretty awesome :)! I loved the fluffiness! Thanks for sharing! |
Entwife Incognito chapter 1 . 5/28/2013 Great first kiss! |
wimmer511 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013 He pushed him out of a plane? That's intriguing. Over a city? Yucky. Still, kind of like to know more about that. Cute story! I liked it when Lisbon turned from him at the beginning and the mention of turtlenecks made me chuckle. Great job! |
Bethy1416 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013 As to your Author's note, I forgive you ;) sometimes we have to make exceptions! And as for the story! I absolutely loved it! The banter at the beginning should definitely be the start to the scene where they finally get together! I love their playful arguments! :) you're good, you're a good writer! |
Ink11 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 Yay! I like it a lot, and I also like that you recognize nothing would ever happen between them if red John was still in the picture. Some people try to put them together beforehand... _ it's hard to keep these two I character sometimes, and I think the shortness of the fic helped with that, but it was also a good job on your part. |
Lettersarecolours chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 Not at all what I expected it to be, but wow! I really like your balancing act between funny and serious. And the kiss in the end was so much in character. Thank you. And, thanks for putting me in your "summary" ) |
Hayseed Socrates chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 Very cute "first kiss" scenario. I enjoyed it, and I liked that she had plotted this all along. Go Lisbon. |
marshmallowdeviant chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 Ah, if it could only happen just like this :) great job! x |