Excelent work, i am new follower and i am reading the other stories, and this one is one of my favorite now. I like the pairing of Natsu and Erza, i like to Natsu and Bisca, perhaps you could make a crossover whit Natsu in this animes hentai: Taimanin Asagi, Ochiru Hitozuma, Kuroinu, Youkoso Sukebe Elf no Mori He, Ikusa Otome Valkirie. Whit Natsu saving the girls, and getting a harem. Thanks for the story.

Not bad, not bad at all.

Use of Words: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Story Flow: 10/10

Overall: 9.50/10

Well, I, uh, need to go take care of something now.

Ahhh... I remember this story from all those years ago. Surely one of the classics, Maximilian Havisham is really one of the greatest NaZa authors of all time (and one of my favorites in my top 5 list out of a hundred).

they where made for each other

That was very hot! NaZa! Always!

LMFAO ! great story a hell of an ending

Great, now I have a super-boner. Well, guess I better get off on my hentai manga.

It's made clear with this one-shot that your I dare say legendary writing skills make amazing lemons. Not only did it make me all hot and bothered, but you made it not seem to be mindless smut. The story, however short, had character and a story behind it (which is sometimes a rare quality with lemons). As of being an avid reader of many of Natsu x Erza, Natsu x Mira, as well as your new story 7 Pieces (I can't wait for the next update!) I would not be opposed to seeing lemons or even more kinds of teasing to keep things T in stories like the next chapter of "The Knight and Her Guardian Dragon" Saga. Thank you for all the excellent reading and idea material! You're stories have been some of the best written works I've ever read. Keep those updates coming!

Now this is my kind of war. If every war is like this then I can bet that tons of people will jump at the chance to fight on the frontlines.
You can write smut / lemons if this chapter was any indication
That ending was hilarious. It was like the icing on the cake.
I love Natsu X Erza pairing so much. I feel that it is a way better pairing than Jellal X Erza. I don't think I have even come across a good jerza fic on this site yet.
10/10 for this oneshot between Natsu and Erza.
I am going to check out some of your other works.

That...was pretty hot.

I couldn't stop laughing at the end, it was just too good! When she was screaming in ecstasy I couldn't help but wonder how no one had heard anything, and the ending completely erased that thought. Great story and look I look forward to reading more of your great work.

Well that war was legendary.

freaking love it and the end is histerical