Given everything that’s happened I don’t think harry would be that naive about war

Also I don’t think Fluer would give a damn about the staff given that Andrews not gonna start gutting the dragon once he’s stunned it

After reading this my thoughts boring as hell it was so damn boring there was no drive to it that made me excited to find out what comes next or even laugh it was just pure boring and Harry is such a naive brat that it's ridiculous

Is he really this naive wow

I liked this story. Ducks you abandoned it after 24 chapters. Think ill skip the new one.

Well I don't know if you call quits to the story it's been four years can't tell if you're rewriting this thing to add more depth to your characters I think you're trying to make her a better story truthfully it was quite enjoyment I thought you're doing a very decent job of telling your story but obviously you giving up on this one and is always I guess thank you for writing

he is going from a somewhat mature kid to a spoit brat

Okay maybe my thorough enjoyment of this story has blinded me, but this story was amazing! I loved all the elements in it. Scenes like the one with the Path of Self just set it apart even further as one of the best stories I've read in recent times. Thank you for writing this!

I have not found many well written 'god' like Harry stories. Alas my seach continues..

I am enjoying the story so far but cant help but laugh at your Atlantis village size. For some reason I remember something about a three kilometer long Aroura class vessel landing on a pier of Atlantis. I am sorry but 1.33 km diameter is village size not city size. I know you have abandoned writing but I couldn't help but comment on the size of your Atlantis.

I personally like the way you're handling the Potters, you can't just transfer Harry from one 'prison' to another, filled with people that he doesn't know and expect him to be happy.

Idea of living on the dyson sphere that's closer in orbit than Mercury is really stupid.

"He admitted that the idea of creating liveable land on the sphere was a bit fanciful as a dream" - Yes, very fanciful. Considering the surface of the shell is closer than Mercury.

Luna would have LOVED the Nox.. And space travel in general.

Its was actually later found out that their not ALL actually speaking English its that the Stargates (Especially in SGA) have (rough.. Not complete) translation devices installed.

not really, RA kept the system lords in line and made them pay tribute and only let them have so many ships per system lord and minor gao'ulds so in general guess they probably only had less than a thousand capital ships between the entire race. remember apophis lost 2 ha'tak class ships and it 'crippled' him.