This has always bothered me in Gilmore girls... I mean, obviously they aren't going to show the in between stages of making out to sex, but there was no way Jess would make such a drastic jump, so thank you for this :)

Loved this.

wow that was really good!

This was cute but i wish it would have been more detailed

Love it love it love it! I wish there was more

Oh. My. God! So good. Like Rory, I want more! This is the kind of sex scene that I can't get enough of. More please?

I really like it. I like stories that talk about what we didn't see when they were together. And I agree, I think there usually is something in-between, and there should be. I think you wrote it perfectly how it'd be for them, too bad there was never any mention of this on the show, but we gotta love the creative mind of Literati writers to fill in this gap for us!

please up date soon!

Need more desperately!

Nicely done!

And I agree, they totally did... more. x