I. Just. Died.

OMG! I LOVE THIS IT SHOWS THAT HUMANS ACTUALLY HAVE PROBLEMS AND OUR LIVES AND ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. AWESOME STORY ITS SO TOUCHING!

AWESOME STORY, I LOVE IT

I am actually going to cry. This is so beautiful, how you slowly solved all their problems by reuniting them as friends again. I also really like how they're so realistic. I had a friend who used to cut last year and got picked on, and I've seen a lot of abusive relationships, which I can relate to. Can you make a sequel? Pleeeaaaaaase? **

I would really love for you to continue this! Throughout the entire story, there were parts where I was giddy with excitement and parts where I wanted to cry! It's extremely well written-I can imagine the things they all went through, and it makes me wanna continue on with them and their getting over their struggles. Please update if you consider continuing this!

I enjoyed the ending. I both giggled and smiled, I thought it was cute. Diffenitly being added to my favorites.

WHY. WHY IS THIS A ONE SHOT. NUUUUUUUU I WANT MORE. MORE. MOOOOORRTTTRREEEEE

I love the end how miku's all like, "oh don't mind us, we aren't interrupting anything."and then len's all like, "ok good" and tries to kiss rin again. But, it was also a great story! I love how haku was all like "YOU'RE AKAI-CHAN! I THOUGHT YOU WERE A GIRL!"

8,857. Woah. Now, I would type a super huge review about your grammar and spelling but I love you too much to do that. The only thing I can do is pat your back, tell you "OMG WE ARE THR AWESOMEST SEXIES VIOLA PLAYERS EVAAAAAA" and try to write as good as you.

Nice job, Ray-Ray-onee-san. I can only hope I write as awesome as you one day. :)

This needs to be continued

THIS IS TOO ADORABLE!

I really liked it.
And yes. It was REALLY long. Took me about 30 min to read it. :3
The ending was kinda weird, cuz it shows Rin really wanting to cut herself, then a flashback to when Len stands up to the other boys, and it never goes back to Rin when she wants to cut herself. :/
Idk. I found it kinda weird.
But hey, maybe that's just me. XP
I love your stories!
Keep up the good work! XD

Wow. Way to make a person depressed.

Jk (well, not really). BUT, AMAZING STORY! I lovedlovedloved how you made everything so serious, yet you added humor in it. I look forward to reading more of your work

A really great and inspiring story. It is a perfect little short story, you should keep it just the way it is.
But maybe you could make 3 other stories branching off this: RinxLen KaitoxMiku AkaitoxHaku
Keep on writing/typing, i cant wait for your next story/update XD

I like this, to put it simply. It's sad that things like this actually do happen. I can proudly say that I've never been stuck in one of those situations, but I can't even begin to imagine what kind of pain people go through if they DO have to deal with this.

And dang, when you got into Rin's thoughts of the past, I could feel the pain. It wasn't even that far into the story, but the emotion was still there. It's really sad to look back on things and think that they would never be the same. :/ *tears*

Error: [Miku and managed to stick together ] Miku and I?

To be honest, I thought Kaito would be Miku's boyfriend. But I really can't see him being abusive, so Dell works out. That's sad, though. Things like that happen to, and it's absolutely sick.

Damn, you must've been feeling really down to write about all this stuff! Poor Len! I'm starting to feel the pain even more and more!

WHOOP! *fistpump* THAT'S IT KAITO! STAND UP FOR HER!

*pausing my reading half-way in the story to add this* I'm to the point where Miku decided to spill about Dell. And at the moment, I can't find anything else to say other than I FREAKING LOVE IT! The whole moment in Kaito's bedroom, with them being trustworthy of each other despite not talking in so long, and...I JUST LOVE IT!

Every. Little. Thing. I can just picture it! Dell, with his cocky, arrogant voice speaking loudly just so that Rin can hear him spilling the secrets about why she wears her arm warmers...it's so amazing that I can feel so in to this story!

This made me laugh out loud xD :["Um, sure," I say, totally not sure at all. Len began his story while putting his shirt back on. Damnit.] Lol, does someone like a shirtless Lenny? *o*

And the story Len told...that was ADORABLE! SO SWEET! AND CUTE! AND FLUFFFFFYYYYY, WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THEM:D

Error? You forget a word? :[ In his hand he holds a basket with the most delicious ever.]

I love how in something so serious, you still write things that are freakishly hysterical. ["Like, seriously. I'm going now. No point trying to stop me,"] My mom and I do things like that to each other. XD That totally cracked me up xD

[I catch site of cuts] This would be 'sight' instead of 'site'.

Hmm...I'm not sure. But I THINK Akaito MIGHT be flirting with Haku. *derpface* xD

Lol, Akaito? A girl!? I nearly died at that mental image! XD That's so freaking hilarious! XD His moments with Haku are hysterical! But Akaito is sooo sweet! I'd never have pictured him like that! *squeals*

That ending was so cute! And friendly! Like everything they'd gone through was coming to an end:DD I don't think words can explain how much I love this fic!(:

If you wanna write more on this, I'll DEFINITELY be there to read it!

I've been working on this review for over an hour, so I'm done. Peace out!

(:Mizune