Anon review here!

I've been binge reading since the prequel and I can't believe the first time I'm coming out of the shadows is cuz I'm so angry at Lassarina?! I can't even explain why I'm angry. Grief is a horrible thing to experience, and it can really change a person, but I can't stand that she's shoving Vilkas away and justifying her cheating like does this girl even know how trust and communication and love work like hELLO at this point I'm feelin for Vilkas' pure and soft soul he has every right to mourn and the fact that he's doing this all alone makes me so sad :'(

But oh my god, see how much I've become so invested in your fic series, I'm feeling for all your characters, and Kiraya's just the sweetest! I love how you captured Brynjolf, and I've always been on the fence about reading double Dragonborn fics, but yours has changed my heart entirely! I love Einarr and Lass (even if right now I'm grr about her current phase, but I know it will pass) and I love how you pace the quests and timelines to fit your story- how the world keeps turning and Alduin is still lurking on the horizon amidst everything- your flow is so organic!

I honestly can't wait to see what happens next, so I will return to my fanfic lurking now and continue binging the rest of your wonderful tale

P.S.
You've convinced me to continue on the Thieves Guild quest just so I can stab Mercer over and over again. He's so despicable, and what he did is unforgivable!

I CANT WAIT TO START THE NEXT ONE AND NOT SLEEP!

i am getting no sleep because of you and your amazing writting

I love this story, I couldn't resist commenting after seeing the mention of The Walking Dead video game... anyways I was already sniffling and that made it even worse lol kudos ;)

This chapter was particularly difficult for me to read. I suffered a miscarriage a year or so ago...reading this brought back some unpleasant memories. But other than crying a bit, this story is going well.

Awwww, I love how they still argue over the name when they sex. X )

A normal pregnant woman is scary enough imagine what just about any of these female characters being pregnant would be like.

I started reading this not expecting to like Lassarina, but as it progressed, the struggles she faced just fleshed her out in a way that is a little difficult to explain. I had to stop reading (on my fanfic app) at the part where she lost the baby. I had this bad feeling it was going to happen, like a fear at the back of my mind ( I wish it didn't happen ; w ; ). You perfectly captured the pain from that, and didn't make it be some one time thing, and then it's a forgotten plot point. I haven't read the next part, but I hope that it wasn't forgotten.
I can't wait for the next part, and then finally the current parts you're working on

i finished it yay, on to the next book!

see you there!

BYE! :D

i agree with the cop names but witch it witch, i know vilkas will be the holy shit kill me now, but i cant decide on who einarr and bryn are?

BYE! :)

It would seem great minds think alike, thats exactly what im planning to do in my skyrim story when i get to it! hehe

i like the direction the story is takeing. poor vilkas tho drugged then left :(

but im enjoying the sotyr anyway.

BYE! :)

This chapter was very said but written very good. Just wanted to say you did awesome.

So am I the only person who didn't hate mercer before he tried to murder you? To be honest I thought he was kinda HAWT.

Oh gawd Vorstag! Awww poor guy. At least he probably gets enough action, I won't feel a sorry for him. Still, Rina darling, you need a vacation or something...

Wow, that's some dramatic stuff right here. I get what Rina is feeling. I might do the same...