| Reviews for To the Ends of the Universe |
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  KethriHolmes chapter 1 . 6/15/2013 Very well done story for your first time! What you might want to do is add a bit more movement and tension. Maybe have them play around a bit more first, or switch rooms, something to not halt but suspend the start of things to help add sensuality and draw your readers in. Other than that, excellent job! The descriptions were wonderful and the emotional side was very evident. _ |
| lovey chapter 1 . 5/27/2013 I LOVE IT. |
| Allyson chapter 1 . 5/23/2013 Loved it! Looking forward to reading more from you. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 That was beautiful! You should write more! I loved it! |
 Cali978 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 I... yeah that was ridiculously sensual. are you sure this is your first story? haha because if you keep writing like this, especially with the doctor and clara, you will have a dedicated reader in your hands. - Cali978 |
