Now this was just pure sweetness! I enjoyed the read very much, thank you!

The resemblance of the promise under the stars is uncanny, I must admit it gave me the goosebumps. Great job! This is one of my faves and I'll never get tired of this. Your lemons are okay! It's short yet steamy :9 and hell, it fits Zack. I don't complain that most Zifa fics I've read have good lemons like hardcore sex that you would really enjoy. They're illegal to be together because both of them are just too hot! Tho I'm a huge Cloti fan, I'm happy to share with Zack :3

Super cute

Love it. I think all stories deserve a bit of cheesiness so it's okay! :)

I love Cloud too, but I hate him in your story bwah (and Aerith!)! I've always been a fan of CloTi but reading your story is making me ship Fack a bit, because Zack's such a fun guy.

Anyway, please don't give up on writing lemon in your own style. I really enjoyed this story!

Great job:) I loved the beginning, middle, and end:3

wow, what a nice Zack and Tifa fic! :) I really enjoyed it, and although it did kinda turn into what you call a cheesy and cliched story, it was great because of the writing. the sentences and scenes were well written and I like how you characterized both Zack and Tifa. their dialogue was pretty funny and witty at times. I really did laugh out loud at the very end! XD

one more thing though, is that I saw a few typos here and there ; nothing major, but I had to read a few sentences twice to get what you meant to say.

this was a wonderful read, I hope you write more about them in the future! :)

Whoa, I really love the last part! So touchy, it makes me happily cry :')
Is this the last chapter? Write more!

wow chapter 3 was worth the wait. I hope you can finish Fake Paradise soon can wait to read it )

This was...amazing. I am usually here reading through really bad fanfics but this. This is definitely a diamond in the rough. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you so much for writing it!

Thanks for the PM.
Awsome ending.
Ignis

Hey, I just read this chapter and it was great! I'm relieved their relationship has gone back to friends, or a budding cuddly relationship :D Hopefully they get together, and Cloud- How DARE he? Aerith can't be good enough to break him and Tifa apart! He has to pay! Anyways, good luck writing, I look forward to the next installment :)

NOTHING'S WRONG, THE FLUFF IS JUST CRAY. SO MUCH. I like how you change the tone, bc straight up sex isn't really love. I mean, like you've mentioned so many times.. You wrote him with a brain instead of just a dick. I think that's how you said it? The date was surprising for Zack, but I loves it. Tifa annoyed me a little for some reason, but it's probably just her and her way of overcoming depression.

Just died of adorableness my grave shall read here lies Hannah death from an unbearable amount of cute rip lol loved it love the pairing love the setting love the situation just...LOVE

This chapter really is enjoyable, especially the Promise one. The connection between them - Zack's charming & open and Tifa's hard to get on - were perfect; only she can slap him right on the ass :) I also love your writing style, it's simply beautiful and very-well-done, really like the choosing of words. Just make it happy ending so that I can be happy for the rest of my life. Cheers!

I simply adored the Zack/Tifa interactions. They were so well detailed and thought out that it flowed flawlessly. Completely loved the date, makes me wish I had a Zack of my own to do that with. Also I'm terribly sorry that I didn't follow/fav your story! When checked the page for updates I was like...didn't I subscribe? Then I got your PM and I realized that it must have errored out or something. Forgive me! I am not worthy! Please keep up the updates, I love the Zack/Tifa interactions like I said. :)