This was an amazing story

good story the ending PERFECT would of been nice to see the but whatever

I remember first reading this and not enjoying it despite appreciating the hard work you put into it. But, I think that was because I had only read a portion of your stories and most of them were closer to the tv show than this one. Reading your later stories, which departed from the tv show made this story stand less out. Looking back, I feel it is just as good as most of your works, despite being depressing.

Wowww...me encantó, gran fic!

I don't know what to say. I have no words, can think of no words for this. everything I'm thinking just can't do it justice. now, I've read every story you've posted from your first until now, and I will continue to read them all until I'm finished and then re-read them. I've also read thousands of other stories consisting of millions of words. this is probably in the top 3 of the best original stories I've read, EVER. there are very few things I've read that are as well rounded, compelling, and finish just as perfectly, and I mean PERFECTLY, as this one. I hope to write nearly half as good as you one day, and will probably follow your works for as long as I can. thank you so much for this work of art.

This is reminding me of the film "Room".

Love this story so much raw emotion and moments captured

There are tears in my eyes as I write this. I read the whole stpry in one sitting and added it to my favorites. What an amazing story. I have rarely felt such raw emotion as I felt reading this. Definately in the top ten stories Ive ever read. Period. Thank you for an amazing journey.
Zach Bowden AKA TheEternalVictor.

i'm gonna use LJ in my jori its abit werid just read it

Painful to read but a really good story

Beautiful, well written, and I LOVE it! *sobbing*

You aren't aware how much I just sobbed. This was beautiful.

I just read this story for the like the fifth time. I really want to know what happens to Tori and Jade after they get married. Maybe a few years later when little Jade is a teenager. I don't know but I feel like I want to know what happens after this all went down. Also want to say that your an amazing writer and I love your stories!

i loved this soooooooooooo much and the way you ended it was perfect not like so many out there that end without giving any kind of closer. you truly have a gift keep on writing.

these 2 chapters would have made a good 2 shot but im glad you expanded