Please update soon

This was pretty good. I would like to see this as a novel. I like that the story takes place 2 years after GXP with Seina being a lot stronger and wiser. That being said this story has some major problems. I noticed a lot of misspelled words, sometimes it's the same word in every chapter. Some of the sentences don't make sense and some are incomplete. If I had to give this story a score I would say 6.5 out of 10 only because of the errors though. The author who wrote this is really talented. I hope to see this as a book one day.

Just to let you know, Tenchi already knows Kiriko in canon.

Wait, what's going on? I thought Ryoko had control over her ability to transform. Oh, it's the hormones.

I was simply hoping that the next time Ryoko and Seina get intimate, that they have a little "furry action".

Now that I think about it, maybe her birthing might be easier if she is transformed.

"about to me melted"?

Considering how the 7th Cavalry got wiped out by the Lakota, I figure the number should have been retired then.

Watanabe, hmm... And I wonder where you first heard that name.

A pirate,... and a virgin too? Wow.

Don't this other girls realize that if the Alpha male gets his love-making interrupted/disturbed, they will ruin it for themselves as well in the long run?

Yes! Seina is standing up for himself!

As long as there is an alpha male at the head of the family, I am totally content.

Oh, so the twins are fraternal.

Wow, Neju is really becoming a heavy burden.

Tenchi's wives are nowhere near as attractive as Seina's.

I never liked Neju, too much of a pestering annoyance. Oh, if only Seina had the guts to at least tell her to shut up at least once.

"Claim", not "Clame"

Also, Seina loved Erma the Furry as well.

Who got knighted?

What good is a third wing?

Damn, not dam. A dam holds back water; damn is the curse word.

The sparring match was a good opportunity for Ryoko to morph back into her furry self.

What do you mean, "20 ways"?

It would be really nice to find a chick who was loyal, beautiful, sexy, and truly desired children all at the same time.

Doesn't Seina mean "building a nursery" rather than "growing?"

The last three lines in this chapter lack one question mark, and two periods.

They slept in the pool? The water and air must both be really warm.

What's a lost cause?

Different "than", not "then". "then Amane" if you'd like to see it.

I thought Amane found her parents to be annoying, especially her wimpy father.

What do you mean "turned down" when referring to Amane's bed?

Oh, I forgot, is there a 2nd Ryoko?

"I DID mean to make you cry"?* Seina is an ass!

*CtrlF if you want find the error easier.

If only Fuku was an actual cat rather than that crossover creature.

Yeah, lots of typos.
This needs to be cleaned up.

Don't get me wrong, I am hoping you found a way to redeem Seina from all the bad parts the show gave him.

Amane was always my favorite.