In the off chance you read this, i wish you'd continue with the story

I’m so sad this is discontinued. This was a really well written story, and I was looking forward to seeing Ash face Tobias again, since it was previously teased. I hope you come back to this.

To Correct the reviewer below me. Noctowl can use lock on in gen 2 pokémon crystal version but they would know that if they actually played any of the original pokemon games

Noctowl can't use Lock On

Hey man I know you're busy and all, but please give us some sort of update if you don't mind? I really want to know what happens next and I get that life can get stressful and all, but at least let us know what's going on. Maybe put up a temporary update chapter explaining your plans. If you don't have the will to finish the story, that's fine but please don't leave us in the dark. At least tell your supportive readers so then we can put our thoughts to rest. Or if you don't want to write this story, than maybe I can help. My main account on this site is TyrantGold and I'm willing to help finish this story but then again, it's your call completely. Wishing you the very best in life and hope that you respond to this. Thank you.

Hey younger-p what happened?
Its been 2 years since last update
I know that real life is more important but you can at least tell us that you wont finish this story.

I really do hope you haven't abandoned this story. It would be such a treat to be able to read it through to the end. Anyhow, I hope that life has been treating you well!

Hello YoungerP, I know you do not know me, but my name is Erik. I have read this Pokemon story before and I must say, that I am deeply impressed by how you made Ash become more dedicated to his training and how he became withdrawn and distant from his friends, where he tries to avoid them, but slowly opens up to Anabel. Along with the changes you made with Paul, even though he's still aloof towards people, he's shown to be somewhat a bit more civil and empathize with those he lashed out and ridiculed in the past and even become more respectful to those who give him a better challenge. I was wondering; how would you like to work on a new version of an old Pokemon fanfic story: Facing the Past. The story plot would be that Delia was murdered by Team Rocket for Ash interfering and foiling their plans and Ash was blamed for it by the parents of his friends, (along with Misty's sisters), telling him to stay away from Brock, Misty, May, Max and Dawn and saying they never wanted to see him again. He would leave Pallet Town and be living in a cabin he and his Pokemon built near Mount Silver for five years and he would refer to himself as Eclipse Silverline. Do you happen to have a Gmail account? If you do, you can contact and reach me on my Gmail account; . If you get this message and like it, you can contact me and we can discuss it further. Peace.

just read your story I loved it

Hope to see this updated soon

1 sided battles are the best

Sparkydragon98- If Paul is battling Sabrina, then I'd like to suggest making him use his Aggron, Honchkrow, and Ninjask.

Great Chapter and a story

Hey great chapter. Good way to bring us back into the story after such a long time. Seeing things from Paul's point of view is interesting. I can understand that you're life is pretty busy and all so don't worry about that. Just plz try to update a little more often,and not have these huge gaps in time between chapters. Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon. Later.

LOL, Poor Cilan Had To Deal With Iris And Georgia For A Whole Month, Great Chapter!