Okay, so I barely made it half-way through this before I had to quit reading. As someone who currently battles mental illness, your lack of understanding regarding the use of anti-depressant medication is shocking, disgusting, and honestly, shows you should stop trying to write about things you clearly know nothing about.

You also lack an understanding of anatomy too, because any being that has a tail would have the sensory input of a tail, so while getting dressed, she would have felt it bunch up in her pants/panties as they wouldn't have the requisite holes in them to accommodate a tail, even then she'd feel the tail as extra pressure on her lower back.

This story also fails to explain what drove her to not go back to feudal Japan at the end of high school, you start off stating she's a neurosurgeon, but should you have made her an oncologist instead? Because every form of medical term in this first chapter alone are all forms of CANCER.

Even in fan fiction, things have to make sense and nothing in this story does, there's no real lead up, there's nothing to state you know your subject matter, and frankly, I see no hope for this being more than a few chapters in what would be a story to show people how not to write. I emplore you, I beg you, take this down, rework it completely after gaining more understanding on what you want to write about, then repost.

What you have managed to do is take two well written stories (InuYasha and Dragon Ball Z) and create something that is just shy of an actual biohazard from them. I cannot recommend this to anyone, all I can do is hope this review keeps people away until your content is worth reading.

gods I need more

please update soon

So much drama. I hope Kagome goes on an adventure soon.

Is the jewel even gonna let her come back?

Kagome’s just hungry?

Chichi seriously misunderstood. Yamcha too.

Kagome, a mental breakdown? Lol.

Kagome has become a Saiyan?! O-O

I love this chapter I can’t wait to see what you come up with Max are you going to have to Kagome moo the floor with her ex in the next chapter? Are you going to have Gohan take a shine to Kagome when she comes?

I would love to read more of this story please!

I give up. Sorry, I can't stand the rushed plot, lack of punctuation and grammar errors.

Your grammar sucks! You don't use comma, nor Caps Lock when starting a paragraph. It's ridiculous!

Lots of grammar errors and misspellings in this chapter.

Good story so far. Hopefully, it will be updated soon