OUCH. Those last three lines - (*gut punch*). You always capture T'Pol's voice effortlessly - excellent as usual. :D

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You certainly felt for her and her feelings. Great reading thanks for sharing.

Very stark, very expressive. It says a great deal with very few words, which is an art in itself. I really loved it.

Whoa, that was incredibly intense! Damn good writing, thank you.