Damn this is perfect

Sweet. I love the finishing line, very her. Keep writing

Thoughtful story!

Amazing...this is just amazing! I love it!

Great story. Very good. Well written. Simply loved it.

I really liked your story, how all the things she didn't want at first turned out to be exactly what she did want. the bit with Severus was a good twist. You're giving me quite some competition here!

This was really sweet and adorable. I'm always on the fence with James and Lily - it really depends how they're written. You wrote them well, though, and it was great. I liked the little stages of their lives, and the snippets and great job!