Holy shit it got dark so fast chap 46 lmao wilding

It's good. Something else, but warmly welcome. I do hope you find the will to finish it.

I love the raw, psychological aspects of this story. Such a fascinating read. I look forward to more!

Oooh I like this soo far it's interesting to think of Veggie as lonely

Oh my god. I'm so scared. What is he going to do? Is this the end? I have to admit I was terrified and expecting the worst after seeing your horror warning. Nothing too bad happened - yet - but I have a sinking feeling. Will you ever continue this? I really hope so. I usually don't review multiple times on a fic, but as you can see I couldn't help but review on all those important chapters! Your writing is so poignant and tense, full of longing for existential closure and understanding of self... It's dark and cloying bittersweet. Please write more!

Holy that last paragraph! I seriously Teared up, it was so beautiful. You always keep the theme of this story in mind, and the motifs of Vegeta's being and his relationship with life are so powerful in their simplicity. Can't believe some cashmere could bring around these kinds of thoughts.

Bulma hit the nail on the head! Veggie is having existential crisises about everything. I really like how you portray his anxiety and introspection.

Aw I know Vegeta and Raditz weren't best buds, but I always pictured the three of them having Saiyan survivor comraderie. Makes me sad to read about Raditz being mean to Vegeta too.

Wow a Saiyan origin story! Super cool.

This is such an introspective and existentially explorative doc! Love it.

Is that the last chapter?
It's nice delving into Vegeta's deprieved mind. He's a psycho and truly mad.
But you wrote his insanity here so coherently.
Now, I'm wondering on what your take is for the after Cell saga.

He's a clueless prick, which suited him perfectly.

Is that the final chapter? Makes me think that Vegeta is a psycho, with stunted EQ.
Although you're one of the best Vegeta-Bulma writer here. The characters are really defined. You flesh out Vegeta, as he should.
I would like to see some sort of realization here for Vegeta, where he'll learn to be at least a semi-decent guy.
Will there be a sequel? Seeing that this story is only the 3yr gap? Thanks

Please come back and finish this. This is one of the best Veget/Bulma fanfic I have ever read. I love seeing everything from Vegeta's perspective.

stopped liking this story as soon as i saw that vegeta has made out with raditz in the past real turn off bro