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   Lady Jamboreemon chapter 48 . 1/10/2015 So far, Kassie is the daughter of Poseidon-just play along here because I'm being series. She might also be the daughter of Zeus, the thunder/fire god, but I hope to hades she's not the daughter of Gea, the Earth goddess. Of course, all these names-Poseidon, Zeus, and Gea are greek names from the Percy Jackson series-read if you don't know. I wonder if Charlie can detect earthquakes and help people in those zones not get harmed? What about Kassie, helping the seas not flood over during storms and damaging crops. What about her also trying to fight fires with that water power? Could she also be the daughter of Aeolis as well, let's home so and not at the same time. Once again, just play along with this, for of course Kass is not the daughter of Greek gods in any story. |
| Lady Jamboreemon chapter 47 . 1/3/2015 This was good, but I wonder why someone would hit/stab Kassie, either on purpose accident. |
| Lady Jamboreemon chapter 46 . 1/3/2015 Keep updating. |
| Lady Jamboreemon chapter 45 . 1/3/2015 I liked the whole chapter, well except for Kassie getting hurt. However, I thought she was supposed to play the French horn and Charlie was suppoed to play Sax. Did the band teacher have a mixup? Please check with him or something? |
| Lady Jamboreemon chapter 44 . 1/3/2015 I wouldn't use those powers all the time. What if the hunters have trackers to know of such things? As Brom, Eragon's father and mentor once said, "Magic must be your last resort. It has rules, limitations ..." Keep this in mind when the twins are using the magic. Other that, or I will mix a power-binding potion and put it into their bodies. I am not a witch and no none, but it's just out their-the threat anyway. |
| Lady Jamboreemon chapter 43 . 1/3/2015 That would be a telekinetic, not a telipath. Keep updating. |
| Lady Jamboreemon chapter 42 . 1/3/2015 Keep updating when you can/have time. Sorry I haven't read lately. |
| Little Misses chapter 48 . 2/27/2014 But began its on there |
| newbyrocks chapter 48 . 1/2/2014 Please update I love it |
| heavensdarkfallenangel chapter 10 . 12/19/2013 OMG i can so see Alice doing that. I kinda feel sorry for them...but awwww |
| Dawolfpack chapter 1 . 12/15/2013 Hey I love this story can you please update soon! |
| This-is-me-6 chapter 48 . 12/1/2013 Cassie has to be my favorite character! She sounds so cute! I just can't get over it! I wish I had a brother like Charlie though... |
| Dawolfpack chapter 48 . 12/1/2013 Her powers are cool and update soon please |
| This-is-me-6 chapter 47 . 11/27/2013 The story is really good keep going! |
| Dawolfpack chapter 47 . 10/20/2013 Aww I love this story |
