| Reviews for Hitman: Lethal Trade |
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Spleasantly chapter 5 . 2/21/2019 This has been a very good read, and I'm really hoping that you're planning on updating it. Can't wait if that is the case! |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2018 I love you so fucking much lmao |
Phoedra135 chapter 5 . 7/29/2018 here's a target for you, Richard "Dick" Thornburg, the reporter from Die Hard |
Viper001 chapter 5 . 4/6/2018 Who's 47's next target? |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2018 So far so good keep up the good work!, i would love to see 47 take out doctor evil and mini me. I would also like to see 47 assasinate james bond now that would be cool. Thanks keep up the good work |
Andrew.was.here chapter 5 . 2/9/2018 Well, I'm not familiar with any of the characters in this chapter. Nor have I really played the newest game. Just a demo: the training and first episode. That being said, I'm not certain which Hitman title to pick, but I like the sound of Shadow Client... Yea, I'm going with Shadow Client. If I'm interpreting it correctly, no... On second thought, Providence sounds better. Shadow Client, if the game had been titled that might've given away, to some, the big reveal/twist at the end. Or at least hinted at it, again if I'm interpreting that title correctly. Don't tell me, but I'm guessing the client will be the last target... Wait, that seems to be a common theme. Hitman 2, Blood Money, I don't remember Contracts and never finished Absolution. Regardless, it'd be cliche to make the client a target again. Maybe they're orchestrating all the hits, pulling the strings of the, seemingly unrelated contracts? Hmm... Yup, Providence gets my vote. Shadow Client might've spoiled the story for me, maybe... Now that that's out of the way. Great story. A few grammatical errors I noticed. Extra words, as if you were typing up a sentence and changed your mind about what was said, but didn't edit it completely. Not a problem though, I was able to guess what you meant to say. Also, originally you had the client as OIKA and then towards the end OKAI. I also thought blowing up targets was a bit messy though. In Blood Money, didn't 47 get penalized, or his rating suffered if he used loud methods to eliminate his targets? Especially with Pi dying in front of his family and his body mutilated for them to see. Seemed a bit unprofessional on 47's part. Although a good strategy for getting the family away from the report. Though wouldn't they notice it missing when they came back in the house? That detail would've probably been in the police report. And eventually someone would be pointing fingers at OIKA. Still, a great chapter nonetheless and I look forward to the next! |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/10/2017 Good story ! Keep on writing it |
Boggy chapter 5 . 9/28/2017 I'm excited to see you're updating (not that I am in ANY position, as an author, to remark on the update frequency of another author). This has always been a favorite of mine in the archives, and easily stands out as one of the best Hitman fanfic pieces around. It's refreshing to read a Hitman story that actually follows (to any degree) the characterization and story of the actual games. Most fanfic portrayals of 47 and Diana make them unrecognizable in every aspect but name. But you do a great job of bringing the franchise "feel" into each of your chapters and interactions, so much so that I wonder if my own characterizations are, at times, a bit off-base. But I digress. The very concept of your story tickles me—offing popular figures in literature is so brilliant an idea that I'm kinda ticked I didn't think of it myself. But then, you probably do it justice more competently than I would anyway. :) And, as always, I'm thrilled to find another fan of Absolution in a fanbase that is overly/needlessly critical of such a great installment. In fact, it's nice to have encountered an author who's actually PLAYED a Hitman game (versus some who've only seen the films). Great, great job on your fanfic. Interested to see where all the end-chapter intrigue takes us. |
Skylinemaster chapter 5 . 9/21/2017 Damn, I thought the unknown guy was Santiago. |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2017 A couple things: 1. Shadow Client sounds way better to me 2. Yes they do have Marv & Harry, but they also have Mario & Luigi, not that that's bad or anything I just find that amusing. They also have Kane & Lynch if you wanna do something with them. 3. I enjoyed this chapter, as much as I always enjoy the story. You did a great job honestly, all I can say is keep up the great work and do you |
Gamemast15r chapter 5 . 9/19/2017 Idk if my previous one was posted so I'll post this 1. Shadow Client sounds better than Providence 2. Yeah I've noticed that, Kane & Lynch in Absolution, Mario & Luigi/ Marv & Harry in the new one. It's interesting to see this continue 3. You do a great job, it's a fantastic story/chapter and I can't wait for the next one |
williamcll chapter 5 . 9/17/2017 It's like reading the punisher killing the marvel universe. |
Poseidon Productions chapter 5 . 9/17/2017 Man, I've enjoyed this this fic regardless of the gaps in updates. You really do your research for this. Hell, I've thought of doing my own version of this. Keep up the good work. |
Skylinemaster chapter 4 . 7/25/2017 Awesome work. I really liked Transporter meeting Agent 47. Lol when 47 thought he was a cosplayer. |
Skylinemaster chapter 2 . 7/25/2017 I think it's funny that Agent 47 went and saw a movie about himself. |