Reviews for A Chance to Breathe
Starlight623 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Beautifully done!
saltyscully chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
The allusions to breathing were so wonderful, i just can't with these two. Also i'm still trying to grasp the schematics of this bc i've heard it's quite difficult but hot damn. Even more intimate since the change in position made eye contact impossible but instead made room for just feeling.
IceTear1 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Would be nice to hear what Snow will do to get even. Maybe a sequel? :)
BabochkaX chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Wow! I absolutely loved this, it seems so natural and so well written, you can feel the love as well as how familiar they are with the set up. It's inspired me to make my next sex scene a little more daring
NinjaSnow chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
YES! I LOVE YOUR FANFICS! You're my favorite Fanfic author and I've been keeping up with Made All the Difference, and there's FINALLY a new fanfiction by you, and do you know how LONG I've been waiting to find a good, new Rated M Snowing fanfic?! I haven't read this yet, but I'm about to... I didn't pay attention above if it said it, but I sure hope this is not a one-shot...
Beloved of Apollo chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Snow and Charming seem like the kind of couple who need to be looking at each other at all times during sex. For intimacy and reassurance. But hot damn, that change in position was really sexy!
burgundyburning chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
What a nice, romantic break to the afternoon. Snow and Charming are so heartfelt and wonderful together. Now write one for Neal and Emma :-)
this.site.is.a.waste.of.time chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
LOL great! Are you going to continue?