| Reviews for The Beach |
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   Beetle126 chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 Good story |
| mercurial ira chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 Yes, I LOVE DEANLUNA! |
| Jazz E. Roisin chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 The calm way Luna reacts gives a hint of comedy to the situation. You captured this moment perfectly. |
| FamousNoOne chapter 1 . 6/28/2013 Ah, this was lovely. :) |
| beatnikthalia chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 I'm a HUGE fan of Luna/Dean. This was really sweet and well written. Thank you for sharing this! |
| Khyharah chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 So cute! Exactly how I would imagine Luna in labor lol |
| sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 loved it thank you sequel please and what about her nose |
| 333 chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 Awwww.. That was lovely The end was hilarious! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 Magnificent, as always 3 |
| write-this-song chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Aw, it was so cute! Very realistic feeling too. Thanks for writing. |
| optimistiCelia chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Super cute, as always! Sweet, fun, and I can totally see this happening. Thanks so much for this - it was the perfect one-shot for such a lovely May day. -celia- |
