| Reviews for Too Close for Comfort |
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Guest chapter 12 . 8/11/2015 please update I really want to know what's gonna happen |
Alex chapter 12 . 6/7/2015 Great story i hope you keep going throw more events and write more chapters love it;-) |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/7/2015 Love your story ! |
lremmy chapter 12 . 7/30/2014 I have read all 12 chapters and they are all awesome, can't wait to read more. You've got me hooked. |
CheekyClaudine chapter 12 . 10/24/2013 ... It's been months. Update! |
PL-LovesDAandSPNForever946 chapter 11 . 7/11/2013 OMG! This chapter is soo good. Now this is the Seth that I know and love; the one that has feelings. Seth has been hurting Roman this whole story with no remorse for his actions. Now to see Seth realize just how much he hurt Roman. That was amazing. I love that this is not an easy decision for Seth. Yes Seth is in love with Dean, but now maybe Seth is finally realizing just how much he cares for Roman. It's also nice to find out why Seth stayed with Roman for 2 years if he wanted Dean. Maybe Seth didn't realize just how much he depended on Roman. And didn't think that it was wrong to use him if he could believe that Roman didn't love him. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon. |
lilasskickersmom chapter 11 . 7/11/2013 I really love this story! I look forward to all your updates! |
thehoundsofjustice chapter 11 . 7/11/2013 omg ;-; this is getting so intense! |
Sparkles Blue chapter 11 . 7/11/2013 No, thank you! This story is soooo... I can't even put into words. You just take me away with Roman's and Seth's feelings. I can feel their disappointment and anguish. I can feel Seth's turmoil. You just have this way of crafting human emotions so raw and pure and that I just love it. Just beautiful. |
ApolloGoGo chapter 10 . 7/6/2013 Not 100% sold on Dean and Seth...it really is all about Seth and Roman :-P I enjoyed this and the update though :-) Maybe Seth and Dean will grow on me... |
CheekyClaudine chapter 10 . 7/6/2013 like today? you are going to bring them today? |
thehoundsofjustice chapter 9 . 6/15/2013 omfg ;_; he told him he loved him. he fucking said it. i cant. nope. go away. |
Sparkles Blue chapter 8 . 6/14/2013 There was nothing wrong with this chapter. I thought it illustrated Seth's frustration about the situation beautifully. Can I just offer a suggestion? Write what the hell what you want to write. A good story has pacing, you don't have to explain the build up to the reader. You're damn good at writing, so just do you and quality readers will stick around. |
thehoundsofjustice chapter 8 . 6/14/2013 WHY DERP ASS ROMAN GOTTA COME RUIN THE GOOD MOMENTS? You know what. Tired of him. Finna snatch his ass up somewhere. -.- And you stfu cause this was a good chapter, k? k. Keep on writing. |
PL-LovesDAandSPNForever946 chapter 7 . 6/13/2013 I like this story. It's great writting for a Dean/Seth fanfic. However, I do find it hard to believe that Seth has no remorse & no feelings for Roman. He stayed with Roman all of this time and now he wants to cheat on him and make him believe that it's his fault. I just don't see Seth being this heartless to someone who cares about him. P.S. I am a huge fan of the Seth/Roman pairing. They are my favorite couple. So I would love to read a Roman/Seth one shot or even a longer story. Anything with this pairing will turn out great. |