| Reviews for Surviving the Ice |
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   TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 That was really cute. Nicely done. -Charmy |
| Pirates of the Moon chapter 1 . 7/4/2013 sweet story, really. When arthur and merlin hug together. Nice fict :) |
| Anim3Fan4Ever chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 awww that was just... so adorable! I loved it! Oh my gooooosh! Cuuuute. |
| DorkyPocky chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 So cute! I dare imagining Merlin telling everything to Gwaine, thought xD |
| Olin Perkins chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Hehehehehehe. Your descriptions were good, and your dialogue was very in-character. This was really good! My one suggestion involves the first line. "Merlin cursed under his breath releasing a cloud of vapour from his lips as he hurried along the icy corridors of Camelot." You need a comma before "releasing." I know it may not seem like much, but when it's the first line that people ride of a story... Other than that, this was really well done; nice job! |
| Loulou2a chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 An OS very cute. |
| Sire-wehn chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 A lovely observation of Arthur and Merlin's relationship! |
| sarajm chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Cute ;) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Lovely story. Nice little snapshot of Arthur and Merlin's relationship. |
| Mika271170 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Oh,what a cute story! Too bad it is complete,you should weitte some more! |
| LinBates chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 It's well written & cute, but it didn't go anywhere! A story really needs a goal, but this one didn't have one. But it would make a great distraction in a longer piece. |
