Reviews for Pales in Comparison
CharmH chapter 1 . 1/13/2019
WOW! That was scortching HOT!

I could picture the scene in my mind's eye with your words. Brilliantly written! You have a new follower.
Daryl chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
this is incredible for a first timer
Steph chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
That was hot!
ILoveAnnaKendrick77 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Well, that was hot. Loved it.
Yes.My.Queen chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Pleasing...
Get it! Teeheehee
and I like your username.
bvscagle chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Damn that was hot! Great job!
momo0424 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
That was hella good!
AoifeRose chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Really good job, well done! Keep writing :)
Spencer chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Great job I could not tell it was your first ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Well written hot stuff! More plzzzz!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
HOT! :) great job! Keep writing!
smooche chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
that was a cute story and i think awesome for a first time writer...i could see the 2 of them teasing each other ... good job..
MissToastie chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
That was insanely hot. I love your writing and would love to read more!
bnh1629 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
This was amazing and so hot! Very well written! I can't wait to read more from you! :)
Yung Girl K chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Hot! Hot! Hot! I can totally see the end of the report have something at the end of like vsbndhdhhdudhhdusjdj. But this was a great story.