Awww! I just loved this so much! Great job!

This was SO good! I loved every bit of it, from Don shouldering all the guilt over what happened to Timothy, driving him to obsessively practice with his bo to Leo being the awesome big brother and taking care of his little brother to Raph and Mikey sensing something was wrong and offering support in ways completely in character for each of them. Beautiful!

Ahhhh, this made me love my siblings

In all your writing u really do like to s Donnie suffer, don't you ;-)
Love your writing. Keep it up.

Poor Donnie :( but you are such a excellent writer I love your stories and it would be awesome ifbyou could write one with Donnie and Raph

cute! more more more more!

i loved the story it was very good keep writing.

I really loved this fic! Thanks for writing!

This is a great one-shot, you really captured the personality, emotions, and nature of all the characters well. Also, it was quite interesting to see that each brother needed Donnie in so many different ways, and of course you highlight this very profoundly too. Anyway, great job, and I hop to see more of work based on this TV series. :)

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Aw, that was excellent. Definitely filled some gaps left after that episode. Nicely done. Nick should hire you are a writer, haha.