Story is interesting so far but formatting was weird for this chapter. You may want to check it out.

Please pleeeaase update

I never liked Rapheal so I’m pretty happy with his death

This is so good! I hope you find time and muse to go on (:

if you ever continue this story (which you should; i'm all tingly and excited thinking about the many ways this can go), er, you might wanna revise this chapter a bit so the "p" and "/p" and "i" and "/i" are gone. formatting sucks, eh?

Sam might think he has the upper hand but in the end he's only doing what Lucifer allows him to.
I guess the only way to really control someone is to lead them by what they desire, but Sam does not have it figured out yet.

Hmm that's an interesting connection. I didn't know that Samael was another name for Lucifer, but now it's scary that it's so similar to Samuel. I wonder if the Supernatural creators thought of that as well? But nice work putting in that little tidbit! And I can't remember who Brady is - is that a character from Supernatural, or someone you created? Great work! Can't wait for the next update! :)

This is an interesting series of events! Hopefully the things Sam is doing will help in the long run. And hopefully Dean doesn't flip out on him! You're doing a great job of keeping everyone in character. Keep it up!

I'm really excited for this! It seems like a great plotline so far. I could actually picture Sam trying to fix his mistakes by any means possible, and this way actually seems plausible. The ending of this chapter leaves a lot of ways to go from here, too. Great work!

I love this so much! Looking forward to more!

Please please please UPDATE soon! I LOVE this fic.

I LOVE this story so far. Ur doing a good job keeping them in character, i think thats exactly how dean would react in a similar situation. Please please please please please please please please please please please please update this soon!

I love this story

Aaah... Brilliant! I love it! Protective!Lucifer (Well, he's often protective) is just oddly adorable. Dean being all 'What is going on Sam get away from the Devil' is also pretty awesome.
Great chapter! Keep it up!

Ohhhh Snap.
So now Raphael is dead... hmmm... now what?
OH Cas I wonder what he'd think of this if he came to check up on Dean right about now 3
I can't wait to read more! :3