Oh, this was headed somewhere good! Please continue! Or if you have lost interest, let me! It should be finished! Wonderful, wonderful work.

This is amazing! The entries are exactly like the voice logs in the game and I'm amazed at the level of detail these simple entries hold. I am so pleased to have found this, it is wonderful work, thank you. A real tribute to these two, the game, and the universe (or rather, universes?)

this was very good, it shows how the lutece's felt in the matter

actually Robert Lutece exists in the universe with booker dewitt not zackery comstock.

can you please update this story it is very good.

"Upon hearing of this, Fink established his own power company that used the energy drained from the girl to power the city." Wow. That's just... wow. Elizabeth must be producing a lot of energy, then. Shock Jockey! I know Rosalind and Robert are inspired by Tesla, but that "why can't it be free" question really reminds me of Tesla!

I really like how you're leading up to the events of the game, with the Boxer Rebellion and the Columbian holiday! 10 more years until Booker arrives...

This feels like something Ken Levine wrote himself (which is a compliment)
Keep up the fantastic work!

"What Comstock failed to understand is that my contraption is a window not into prophecy, but probability." Holy. That's like the basis for Comstock's entire character in Infinite!

"It was like the first time I felt like I was having a real conversation with someone". Aw! :')
Like I said, it'd be fun to explore Robert's life before Rosalind instead of vice versa.

I wonder what it's like in Robert's universe? That would be a really fun option to explore: Robert's life before Rosalind found him!

Rosalind is so excited here, it's so cute! I enjoyed that you showed the first conversation between these two. It's not what I imagined, but it makes sense!

I'm only on Chapter 5 here, but I want to say I think your story is great! The Luteces are my favorite (so classy and hilarious and intelligent) and I think your fiction here is the longest on this site about them. I like to read very fiction, and this hits the spot. I am impressed with what I see so far. However, in Entry #4 to #5, the date went from June 1890 to January 1892 and it says "it has been almost 3 years since that day". It doesn't quite add up. But please, keep it up!

Thank you for the update I was wondering if you were okay.

Really intriguing! I love it. Keep writing, you're quite good at it.