I love these poems! :) You have an excellent word choice and I wouldn't know how to make them better ;) Thanks a lot! (and maybe write some more..?) Anyways, keep going! :D

This is so moving! I have tears in my eyes after reading this! Loki is treated too unfairly in the marvel universe, if controlled it, Loki would be all powerful and a nice guy, yet still mischievous and annoying, however I don't own anything *sighs* oh well... You still wrote this poem absolutely beautifully and I'm glad to have read it. :)

O my gosh, that was great! You have talent.

Ooh, you updated this! :D So this is complete now? (Just 'cause you said it's concluded but the status isn't complete)

Mweheheh... :3 Is this poem directed at Thor? Thor being the you, yeah?

"The preceding line twists two lies." - I like ;) And this also makes it seem like it's written /to/ someone, rather than just about.

I think it's interesting in these poems how you keep using "the frosty blue" as an epithet for Loki :3

"Before you know / all evils show," - I'm guessing this means like, before it's known that everything he did was of evil intentions? And then you go on to say how Loki fought to conquer Midgard in order to get Thor's attention and be brought home - or at least, that's what I got out of it ;3

Thanks for sharing! *-*

Beautiful! I absolutely admire your writing skills :D "What happened to the chance (...) And still see he was kind" Fantastic :)

Oh! Okay, I kind of see where you're going with the beginnings now o_o And how it really fits with the title... you can just forget what I said about that in the last review XP I didn't realize where you were going with it... I probably should have been more observant XD
Anyways! Again, I love this! :D
I especially loved this bit: "But though as alone
As a shadow in light,
A whisper among roars,
From not sunlight, but ice,
He loved just as strongly
The pained years away."
I don't know, just... O_O Again how much Loki loved, despite not being that loved... T_T And I just really love your phrasing in that part *-*
And also: "Of unforgotten glad days," because I just really love the rhythm of that line, and the sounds and feels of the words, especially when I say it aloud... XD
That said, I feel like ending with the word 'kind' instead of 'nice' would better fit that rhythm :)
And the word 'naught' is always really fun ;) And I like the rhyming with 'fought' too... but how it wasn't all rhymed, so it didn't get tedious *-*
Thanks so much for sharing! :D

Ooh, I love this! As always, you seem to have so much hidden meaning in your writing...
This part: "Their king would fall
From his mistake,
The same mistake
That others would make."
Was the mistake underestimating and rejecting Loki? T_T
I especially love that ending *-* Because it's just so true how Loki still loves, even though he's been hurt so much...
I wasn't particularly fond of the first two lines, though that's possibly because it personally reminds me of an annoying camp song XD Er... so it could just be me... but I feel like you could come up with a more interesting hook :) Like, maybe something a bit more descriptive? Just a suggestion, though :) Overall, this poem is awesome! :D

I love it! :D