This was very good. It has to be one of the first Neverland stories, and there are many now, but this is special. The adventures on the Jolly Roger are very good, and the characters are excellent. The shadow, Pan, Michael, all the original aspects make this story very good. Thanks for writing, I plan to see what else you have written.

Absolutely loved this whole story, the action, angst and emotion. Easily as good as a OUAT episode. Looking forward to reading more of your writings on CaptainSwan.

AMAZING fic and job on it! I absolutely LOVED it! :)

Wow, I loved this fic! You did a Brilliant job, and such a beautiful ending too.

regina is sick.

Oh I loved this! Twothings; I don't understand the title and I think this would get more attention if you spiced up the description, I almost didn't read it and boy am I glad I did. I really liked your spin on the tattoo, clever. I also liked your peter pan tale, I loved OUAT's too but yours was really unique and I liked it, different from all the other fics I've read, very enjoyable. I was in fits about Regina going after Killian! Ahh! I wouldn't have forgiven her that's for sure. I really liked your resolution development between Killian and Gold, what will power not to crush his heart!
You did a WONDERFUL job, truly a pleasure to read! Thanks so much for sharing your writings, cheers!

this is by far my favorite captain Swan story ive read i love it so much

So I'm currently up far later than I should be reading this and I'm pausing for a second between chapters to say how much I'm loving your story! On the one hand I'm really glad nothing worse happened with Regina and Killian but on the other hand when I read what she was doing and her Graham reference at the end of that previous chapter I was so awed. I thought for a moment you might have her controlling him for a couple of chapters, and as awful as that would've been it would have also been an amazing twist in your plot! Neverland storylines are some of my favorites and I'm so happy I found your fic to read - it's full of the beautiful pacing and vivid characterization that only good, long fics can ever offer. It's going to be so difficult to not stay up all night reading!

that was incredible!

Awesome story from start to finish! Amazing!

This was THEE best Captain Swan fic I've read! Loved the ending!

This was so beautiful! I loved the way you tied everything up so wonderfully. I was nervous and afraid it was going to end really sadly a few times, but this story couldn't have made me happier! One of my favorites I've read for "Once Upon a Time". I'm so glad you shared it and that I found it to read. :)

I whole heartedly loved this story! You did a wonderful job. :)

Oh, I hope being honest is good in this case and not her just trying to protect herself. I love how he keeps pulling her in with his hook and tucking her in his arms - such an adorable description! I also liked him letting her steer for a moment, telling her it will help calm her.

Snow gives such good advice! I only hope Emma will listen and let Killian back in. I also hope Killian isn't planning to join himself to the Shadow to save the Lost Boys and stay in Neverland. Emma shouldn't have
to lose someone who is obviously her True Love.