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sweet lovely and sexy hot.

GREAT! I love this couple. They're so cute! I loved how u wrote out yonekuni's thoughts. :D. Pls write more. Maybe one where yonekuni gets jealous when guys get close to shiro or something.

Definitely the best cute.

Thank you for writing this story. I've been looking for something like this for so long regarding Yonekuni and Shiro's story. I love this pairing so much and I really needed a better continuation for them cos the actual Sex/Love Pistols series is taking way too long to get back to their part of the story...

I've read so many fanfictions about yonekuni and shiro and this is one of my favorites... so hot and so intense

This is like what I need after the Christmas chapter of the manga! I love this couple, they're my fave, and I'm thankful to u, for writing this. Tho, I want to read when Shiro get pregnant and give birth now LOL. Anyway, Thank you again! _

Yes, please write some follow up chapters! I loved the way you wrote Yonekunis thoughts.

Where is your another that you wrote in the bottom of this story

Thank you so much for this! I think this is a very good representation of Yonekuni's feelings, as well as Shirou's! I hope for a sequel...maybe an mpreg! Tehehehe :D

omaigod... I'm sorry... but I really am crying reading this.
Thank you! For the closure, I think this is a perfect fanfic about Yonekunishirou relationship.
I need the chapter 2 please :)

Hi :)
Okay, this was one of the best bed scenes I have ever read. What I liked the most was detailed description of their feelings throughout the whole story - it just made everything more intense :) I have a feeling you'd be great with writing long suspense or hurt/comfort stories. I hope I'll be seeing more of your work here :)

This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE YOU

I was glad u stumbef upon this fic! XD this Derris has such a sms following that I didn't think if find a fic I'd really enjoy but this was so great! It was well written and gah! Such a fun read, I'm almost embarrassed by how much I liked it x3 wonderful work with these two they're my fave pairing an you did a macolous job with them! Loved it darling, hope to see more?! :D

Ah I think i've read your story approximatively 100 times. I juste love it so much, i find the balance between the erotic part and the sweet part just you so much, read this make me oh, i don't know, dream, fantasize etc..