awwwww

haha are people reading? iv come back after searching the archives. ugh, to much sifting to do. I love this story, keep writing please

AWESOME! When is the next chapter coming? I love how he plans to kill the child, but still takes the time to tuck her hair behind her as he puts her back into the air vent! You've got to put the next one up soon! This is amazing!

You're back, and with another incredible chapter. I absolutely love how you show how deadly Kahn is and then he goes and tucks a strand of her hair behind her ear! You are very talented story teller. :D

I love this story so much! You are such a brilliant writer! Honestly I'm so excited to have found a story as amazing as this. The way you wrote Khan is absolutely perfect and true to his character; he obviously cares for the girl but he's not overly emotionally about it (staying true to character)! I love the plot of this story as well and can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for writing such an amazing story! Update soon :)

I wasn't sure how this was going play out, but I'm glad I read it. I need to know more what happens! It'll be exciting if the starship crew finds the secret stowaway. Please update again and thanks!QQ

Well, well, well. This is going to end badly... Even I can see it. But it's touching, too. I wonder how will she fit into the story now that it's starting to go down the drain...

Yes, they are. I'm a refugee from the Hobbit, but I love Star Trek and am really enjoying your story!

You outdid yourself. This is great. I love this girl.

Yes we are :)
I veered clear of it at first because there was a major OC, but I decided to give it a try and I find it good so far. Keep it going!

Please continue this! I love your style of writing and I look forward to new chapters!

Hey I just wanted to say great job on the story so far! This is a great and unique story and you shouldn't stop updating. Keep going! I can't wait to see what John has to say. Just a few things I recommend that you make the chapters longer. Short chapters drive a lot of readers nuts. Some might even stop reading if they're too short. Since this story is pretty good in my opinion I'm sure they're still read it including me. Also does she have a name? Or is it suppose to be that way? Well other than that no damage done. Keep going! Don't stop!

I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see what he says to her!

OMG. You are a wonder. I giggled and believed it all.
Good job, you!

Too short, too short. Need more! This is such a cool story and I hope you aren't having writer's block. Please post a new chapter soon. I'd love to share ideas, so PM me if you want. If not, no problem. I still adore this story. :)