Wow, talk about dramatic. You have a flair for dramatic tragedy don't you.

ik zou hem niet terug willen

It took some time to get used to the way this story is written. Not the usual Scandal FanFictionFlow. I came back twice because I love the storyline so much. And now I'm definitely going to finish. Thanx for this beautiful story!

This is an Awesome book! I enjoyed it a lot and hope to see more great stuff from you. Your witting skills are pretty good too so keep up the good work. I’ll look out for other great stories. Also, I love the details you included. Well done once again!

I'm a little late completing this story. But it was well worth it. What a great story. Loved the Presidential twist at the end. Thank you so very much.

What a wonderful story and the way you write is incredible! You made me laugh and cry and agonize over their quarrels and misunderstandings. I wish you can continue writing the next phase to this story even just a few mire chapters to find out what happened to Nur and the new boy in the family and of Karen and Jerry so we can have a full closure. The Epilogue just seemed too harried just to wrap it up. Please write some more. You are sorely missed!

Honestly that was amazing I just Finished reading this, I even shed a few tears I'm just glad they got there happy ending they deserve !

Okay I'm done...removing this story...Feel like I'm reading the diary of a mad person

Im trying very hard to stay with this story...but it just drags. I keep reading hoping it will get better. I can't imagine 40 chapters of this; its bad when you can skip chapters and not miss any major development or impact.

love the story but what is fluff? is it their kisses?

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That was a great story. It took a while for me to decide to read it and once I did I enjoyed it a great deal.

Wow what a storyline. Superb!

I just retread this story because I was so let down by the recent winter finale and the destruction these two have caused each other. Your story is such an invigorating breath of fresh air- think you for sharing your gift with us!

I finished the story...it's okay but I feel like Liv forgave Fitz too quickly...I mean seriously, you can forgive a man who did something like that so easily and for what reason? You love him? Time passed and time heals all wounds? That doesn't apply always and by doing this, it just makes the story look that everything is that easy. Next thing you'll know is that every guy will be doing this, wait for 15 years then they'll live a bit of happily ever after after how many harsh moments and it's just TOO easy. Life doesn't work that way. I guess what I really want to say is that you made the story seem so unrealistic but made everything all human to make it so. Love isn't that easy. Forgiving isn't that easy (unless you're a saint or the pope) and I guess that's the reason why I wrote this review. The story could have gone in so many other ways but you made the story at the important parts (the parts where the relationship would be based on) so fast and all the other stuff that should have been based on the important stuff; still important though; so slow.

I don't mean to bash. I like the plot line. It's just that the nice plot line you thought of wasn't given that much justice on it.

To whoever reads this review, I'm not saying this story is so horrible (and I know some of you will take it as such) and I know some of you will say that I should just make my own story since this is the author's story but I just want to post this because the plot line wasn't given that much justice at all and it's such a waste. The story seems to put off the idea of loving that easy and it sucks because real life doesn't work that ways Some will say 'so what? This is just a fanfic' but what's the point of this fanfic if you didn't make it worthwhile? Just saying really.

I like the story, really, it's just that this story disappointed me and well, I'm just a nobody really whose review doesn't really matter but as a reader and a person who likes Scandal and Olitz, this was just a bummer...