This story is boring because there are so many clichés you know what will happen early

Wauw, congratsulations. I already start hating this story in how it started. James and Lily are so fucking hell dumb to allow a stranger, no matter if that person is friend or not to give him full access to their earthly possession. Fuck this shit. You did it well for ruining Harry's life, Well done!

Except that harry didn't really do it, his mother did 90% of the work.

If I'm right I'll keep going until she understands she's wrong. I dig my feet into the ground and don't budge.

First time I heard of David Beckham

Is there any chance you will complete this? I was thoroughly enjoying both incarnations. PLEASE ! tazdad47

I've really enjoyed your story with Daphne! I wish you'd come back to finish!

This is a very fun story! I like your plot. I haven’t seen split personality Dumbledore before. I think powered up Dobby is fun even if we don’t see him often. Thank you for writing this.

I'm not sure why you decided to make dobby into a super elf but i find him creepy and threatening rather than the usual cute and endearing dobby.

do hope you can carry on with this

...Why rewrite a story when you can't finish it? O_O

This is the beginning of an incredible story. Is it your intention to finish it or have you abandoned it?

Wow, this would have created some amazing spin offs. Regardless, thanks for sharing what you gave us (even if I went off about Hermione). You write and plot very well.

Interesting plotline with sports team and money raising in general

It’s a great story so I will ignore the Hermione bashing. One time the actress answered “none of the above” when asked “Harry or Ron.” She was right. Both dragged Hermione down intellectually. This doesn’t mean she was “smarter” than Harry. Rather she had specific interests that neither boy liked.

Toss in Ron being Ron and the whole crapilogue was just wrong