For what it's worth, I very much liked the story and I hope you continue it.

Love, Neko

'I have killed people. You will make my coffee!'
OmGosh, I couldn't stop laughing after I read that, that was amazing :3

I’ve really enjoyed what I’ve read of this story so far, don’t see a reason for you to rewrite. Your elements of humor, angst and suspense are easing in nicely/ not too much too soon. I really hope you decide to continue this story.

Is this a future fic cuz you said that Ichigo's mom was killed in 2015 that would only make him 10 years old. lol

No worries, take your time. I'll start at chapter one again when you're down fixing them, so I can get back into the swing of things. ;)

Epic!

This was truly amusing. Even after finding out aizen was his boss he still acted the same

Great story . Please don't make Aizen a bad guy.

NEXT!
will aizen be interested in ichigo/kaien personality?
look this fiction

I can imagine ichigo taking aizen to a small specialty coffee shop run by orihime with all kinds of weird a** flavors of coffee

OK it was hard for me not to laugh at aizen intimidating the coffee machine, like it basically shit itself. Im in the hospital so I had to be quite. This was funny.

need more great so farkeep going cant wait

this is actually going well for you. even if you don't like what's written here. i have some advice for your writers block. figure out what time of day you write best at then just write anything and everything. it doesn't matter what. write about your room, what happened during the day and also about what you are feeling. when i get writers block i often also meditate and do physical activity. keep going, you will get through it. :)

Um... lol? I thought Ichi was asleep after killing that guy?

This story is seriously good, despite being only three chapters...