Okay. I'm gonna again be honest. I'm not a crossover fan. Furthermore, I didn't honestly see Winx Club this far. I only saw pretty much up to Enchantix on 4Kids. Therefore actually didn't see the more advanced seasons and only remembered Ashia as Layla.

From what I can determine your writing and its style is this.

You've extremely excellent and solid ideas. You are capable of reproducing the characters well enough to keep accurate to each of them from the established canon. Moreover, you make them speak like they are genuine people. Your descriptions of both the worlds including any signs of what to come are quite satisfying.

You can show and tell without overdoing either extremely well. You absolutely recognize each fandom quite thoroughly so I imagine that comes in beneficial for a crossover.

You convey their passions and personalities extremely realistic. Consequently, I can determine you're a particularly gifted author.

I don't say anything regarding grammar as I know no one perfect and if they mess up a little I don't notice or care. I'm not a Nazi about it and only download Grammarly myself to shut up those who were.

Overall I can perceive you're incredibly gifted and accomplished. Regrettably again I sadly can't go any further. I'm just not a crossover enthusiast. However, I had to fulfill my promise about checking out a story of yours and giving you my honest assessment and feedback.

Therefore I hope you appreciate that. Have a good day. Furthermore good luck with all future stories.

Wishing you all the luck in the world. Kelseyalicia

No está mal.
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Not bad.

Pobre Will.
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Poor Will.

Buen inicio.

¿Donde están las amigas de Will?
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Good start.

Where are the friends of Will?

why will i wish w.i.t.c.h was still around

Will is back! hooray!

Okay, this was one cool final battle. Bloom and Will handing it to the Witches and showing that Will, Irma, Taranee, Cornelia and Hay Lin are the real WITCH deserves some credit. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Cool work!

Awesome story! Want to see more!

Nice work here. Love the work that you do. Keep at it!

Magical, just magical! Great job!

Guardians, Unite!

Nice job with WITCH and Winx.

I can definitely see how this would all play out on a screen. Very dramatic and very good. I like how the Transformation Sequences for the Winx are altered to be more exciting than the ones on Nick. Can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent job, by the way.

Interesting Plot and story. Vendettas and old enemies make up great stories. You're not too shabby for an author of the new era.