LUCI NO

OH SHIT

okay yeah this is AMAZING but im really not a fan of when the paragraphs are all squished up its kinda hard to read

I need more of this in my life as soon as possible.

Have you abandoned this or is it still a work in progress or are you finished writing this? because if you have only lost inspration because you think no one is reading it ur wrong. its really good and i'd love to see it updated. Thanks don't give up on it I think its good

Was that the end?

I see it's been a few months since your last update, and I think that if you don't update again soon I may literally die.
I really love how you write Gabriel. His point of view is my favorite part in this story, to be honest.
And I still want to know what that creaking Lucifer is up to, grrr!

You know, I probably could have read further before mentioning my complaints, because the bigger one is fixed at this point. I apologize.
But LUCIFER NO. YOU FREAKIN LITTLE DEV-. Wait...
I am officially dead. All this is just too cute.
D. E. A. D.

Started reading this because I am currently writing a fic set in a mental hospital as well and was hoping reading others would help give me ideas and just. This is so good I'm not even thinking about that! I'm really interested in what's going in with Sam and Gabe is so cute and I wonder who it is that Sam is seeing. At first I though maybe it was Lucifer, but Luci is obviously human and alive.
I do have one complaint, however. There are a few grammatical errors, but few actually deter from the reading, and as a personal preference, there aren't spaces in between each paragraph, which can make it a bit difficult to differentiate between them.

Really cute story! Looking forward to read more from you (especailly in this fic ;))

xx ketchupid

Are you going to carry this on? Please! *Sammy Puppy eyes*

At least Gabriel doesn't seem to be hurt too bad and Sam is cute How happy he is to see Gabe again. Although I can hardly remember what happened before -.- have to think when I have time for that xD

Please update soon.

That was a pretty cute chap, honey! The last scene was perfect. I hope there's more of that coming. -Maddy

please please please write more! This is one of my favorite stories!