| Reviews for His Beloved Blue Eyes |
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   Dreamer Rose chapter 24 . 7/17 Stupid 4Kids censorship. Their explanation for what Dartz did to eff up Valen always sounded like a total cop-out to me. In the original Japanese version he did way worse than just frame him for crimes. Valen had grown up in a church-run orphanage and Dartz burned the place to the ground with the head nun (who'd been like a mother to Valen) and possibly some or all of the kids trapped inside. He made it look like some punks had done it (or used them as proxies) and Valen was arrested for assaulting them in revenge. |
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/6 (Smirking at Seto Kaiba tauntingly): It's hard to believe that the Snow King's a big softie when it comes to Mokuba, Kagome, Souta and Kisara. |
| Jackie Mueller chapter 29 . 7/15/2018 I told you so that Kisara was the Blue Eyes White Dragon, and not Kagome. |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 33 . 5/19/2018 Kyaa! ! ! ! That! ! Was! ! ! ! AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Oooh, I LOVED this story! ! ! ! Eeee! ! ! ! XD |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 28 . 5/19/2018 Eeeee! ! ! ! This is PERFECT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I LOVE this story! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 27 . 5/19/2018 I knew it! ! ! ! Yay! ! ! ! |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 6 . 5/18/2018 That was PERFECT! ! ! ! XD |
| YukinaBlueRose chapter 4 . 5/18/2018 ROFLMAO! ! ! ! (No other words fit.) |
| pupstarstar chapter 33 . 12/31/2017 Awww~ |
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/5/2017 Why is Kagome always on the sidelines? She's a war veteran with strong miko powers. Gosh, I am disappointed in this story. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/5/2017 The Mummy 1 |
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/5/2017 Your Kagome is pathetic, she knowd lots of things, but she does nothing to change and when she actually decides to act, she fails, shamefully. Did she really help Naraku or was that a fluke? Also, I find it insulting that she thinks a person can stop loving another just because of some battle scars, she should be proud of them, for they're proof she's a survivor. Yet, she acts shallowly, contradicting herself when admiting she's not worth loving if her body is not beautiful. Pathetic. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/5/2017 This narrative is not flowing well, it's too stiff and confined, you sound moee like a journalist stating facts with raw objectivity. I miss the lirism, the epic narrative of an adventure, the love between the characters. Your descriptions are boring and direct... I see no poetry inyour words, I feel absolutely nothing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2017 Lots of grammar errors and misspellings in this chapter. |
| lara5170 chapter 8 . 7/14/2017 Will Yugi also help to get them back or go for his other friends? |
