Holy shit just damn that's cold :(

That makes me like Roland more right there, Claptrap needs some love :) And Yeah it was a bit rushed but it was nice still

Wait did Lilith ruin the moment? Or did claptrap?

Lmao the last Eridians were mostly stoner and hardcore addicts XD

I laughed so hard at how Zer0 just admitted that he was an Eridian it was right out of the blue XD it was so outta left field anyway this story is fucking gold. Keep up the good work~

Keep going...

Just read your whole story and I can say that I am satisfied. I've always felt that tannis was an under appreciated character when it comes to fanfictions so I was quite happy with the pairing. Overall, a very enjoyable read, good job my friend.

This story started off rather slow, but as I continued reading it, your skills in writing grew, and now I think it's a pretty great story. I'm glad I read it-I have to agree that I LOVE stories like Blue Sky, and you did pretty well for being inspired by it.

Your plot points were very well planned out, and I was pulled into the story enough that I ended up either internally screaming or squeeing, depending on the scene. You have my squees, good squire. The only things I didn't like so much were the constant references to sex or swearing-which I can't do much about, considering this IS Borderlands, so I just tolerate it and move on-and the typos. Like I said, your skills did get a heck of a lot better as this went on, which shows how much you improved between updates. However, I could tell that you generally didn't go back to spell-check or proof read chapters, most likely because you were excited to get them posted, which is understandable. It was mostly things like missing the last couple letters of a word and saying "probab" instead of "probable," or getting words mixed up and saying "get that stuck out of your butt" or "play by year" instead of "stick" or "ear." The only one that truly irritated me was when you said that Claptrap was glowing in past tense, and said "glew" instead of "glowed." That's just because I'm an English minor and mix-ups and typos are a bit of a pet peeve for me. But, other than those, you did very, very well. I wasn't sure about the pairing with Tannis at first, but now I'm all for it. I loved the way you did Claptrap and his various minds, and addressed how poorly everyone originally treated him, and most all the dynamics between other characters were great, and I love Toby, he's adorable. If you've improved even more since this story came out, I'd love to see what else you've written. Keep up the good work!

i love the idea you put into this altho i find krieg to be my favorite and it is a sad end so it does kinda bum the story for me but i feel you will make up for it latter

Dude, how the hell did I miss out on such an amazing story.

Why is everyone so mean to Toby

One word bro badass
How you opened it up was frigin awesome
Not how one of the games would have opened up but awesome in it's own right
And if I pretend that while he was walking into town that I won't back down by Tom Petty was playing it becomes even more awesome

When I saw the [Claptrap, Tannis] ship tags, I rolled my eyes. I expeted throwaway lines about a one-sided crush from Claptrap on an oblivious Tannis saying random scifi-magi-science technobabble. I did not expect "trying to be completely straight with a love triangle between Claptrap, Tannis, and a recording device." This is wonderful for some reason and I need to read more.

This was one hell of an emotional roller coaster for me! I really enjoyed it! There were parts that broke my heart but there were light hearted parts and all I have to say is that as the first borderlands fan fiction I ever read, it rubbed a good impression on me. I want someone to turn this into a graphic novel, so I could see how cute Claptrap would be since he would act rather adorably in the non serious moments. Also, spoilers, I'm glad that in the last chapter, the thanksgiving one, Clyde got his own body. He really deserved it for being forcibly trapped in someone's mind for so long and I didn't want him to be isolated. I really grew attached to Clyde.

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