| Reviews for World War- Eva |
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Xyacharia chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 Hello everyone its been awhile. i'd like to officially announce that i am relaunching the story and will edit the chapters already done and continue the story |
Xuln chapter 7 . 9/1/2013 This is my favorite evangelion fic insofar |
ReaperJ chapter 7 . 6/9/2013 I like it, I really like this! The sexual abuse is great but the story seems really jumpy and you don't have a system for when the scenes change with a few misspells. Take your time you have a great story here. Also I think Asuka got a little spay to fast but in the end I like it and sex scenes are well played out but you could go more into them. It;s mature for a reason and if others don't like it they don't need to read it. Keep up the great work! |
PathOfKuma chapter 7 . 6/3/2013 great story so far |
BML2400 chapter 4 . 5/29/2013 Hope this means we move the relationship away from weird, deranged masochism. |
BML2400 chapter 2 . 5/29/2013 Yikes, yikes, yikes. That is one harsh Asuka. Really not sure how this will turn into romance but it is Eva so... |
cj ristopher chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 Good chapter hope they getbit back . |
Phantom Dark-Knight chapter 5 . 5/28/2013 it seem that unit 1 or shinji becoming more and more as a killer o.O |
Phantom Dark-Knight chapter 4 . 5/26/2013 weelllll that something u dont see everyday o.o |
achillesman chapter 4 . 5/23/2013 Good stuff man, keep it coming |
Blitzstrahl chapter 4 . 5/22/2013 ahh the 'ole DSS Choker, Misato learned from Master Gendo on how to lie i see but didnt remember on how such things back fire lol. Loving how your portraying Asuka's unstable ego and narcissistic personality outright admitting she loves her Baka is a pretty big step for her. |
christopher chapter 4 . 5/22/2013 I hope he gets that taken off soon . I wonder if it will end good for them and will he lose trust in misato ? |
Wing00Raiser chapter 3 . 5/21/2013 ok i'll be the first to ask. Why do you let asuka pretty much make shinji her slave? i mean she's pretty useless with everything so why? |
christopher chapter 3 . 5/20/2013 Good good let them fall in love like they should be let them have a passionate bond if you will please . |
Blitzstrahl chapter 3 . 5/20/2013 Now that was pretty surprising seeing Asuka squeamish about killing the enemy pilots, but well into Shinjis character to kill them while being all depressed about it. The Sex was spot on as well the failure to communicate between the two was absolutely perfect. |