| Reviews for If You Could See What I See |
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Raven176 chapter 28 . 9/14 I’ve read this story over the past few days and I’m absolutely in love with it. Once I started reading it I had realized I had read it all before, and only had gotten to the part where Hermione learned she had been potioned without her consent. I decided to continue reading it through to what you posted last and was not disappointed at all! I only hope that you are doing well and that you may return to this story one day to complete it |
Willow135 chapter 28 . 9/8 I read this whole story in just over 24 hours as I couldn't put it down. Hermione's pain is so very real and heartbreaking. I really hope that you're OK and your health isn't the reason for you not updating for so long. Your story is lovely and I feel very satisfied of where the story has finished. Your writing is beautiful. Take care xx |
Willow135 chapter 2 . 9/5 Oh my, I'm crying already.. your writing is lovely. Poor Hermione. |
crochetaway chapter 28 . 9/1 I started reading this thinking it was complete. It's so good! I hope you get back to it one day! |
Scarlett chapter 1 . 8/10 OHMYWORD I love this story so much! Love how you write Sirius and Hermione’s relationship! So sweet. I know it’s been long but would love for more chapters, I need to know what happens! :) |
Anglwitch6090 chapter 27 . 8/3 I know it's been forever, and I've probably commented before with how many times I've read it, but I really need more of this! It's wonderful |
moriah chapter 28 . 8/3 It's been lovely rereading this. I hope you are doing well abd although I would love to read more of this anytime you write more, I hope you are taking care of yourself! |
brady66 chapter 28 . 8/2 Such a wonderful story! It’s a shame it’s not complete |
JacqP chapter 12 . 8/2 This is such beautiful writing! |
jfairlee chapter 28 . 7/27 Noooooo! I started this on a recommendation, and didn't notice it wasn't complete! So sad. It would be awesome if this got completed! |
Phanieste chapter 28 . 7/23 This fic was great! |
diamondnightskies chapter 28 . 7/17 Well...I don't know how I missed it because I'm usually pretty good about checking if something is finished or not before I start it. But I did miss it and only realized in the last couple of chapters that it wasn't complete. I'm really sad bout that since it's been over 3 years, so I'm worried it may have been abandoned. Though I saw from your notes in the beginning of some chapters that you were having health issues...I hope you are well even if that means you just lost interest for a while. I would much rather that be the case than for your health to have taken a turn for the worse. I plan to follow the story in case you do come back to it, and I certainly hope you will! I'm particularly dying to see how Hermione handles people at the ministry ball back in England! I actually really wanted a scene with her and Draco. I was wistfully hoping he would be one of the few previously bigoted purebloods who would actually not be an asshole to her, despite his reputation and what she assumes. I thought it would be really interesting if he were to somehow unexpectedly build her up confidence wise. Like maybe she hears him conversing with Sirius and expects his disapproval about him courting her, but instead he expresses the fact that he's jealous and wishes he could be in Sirius' place. That little dream makes me happy sigh. lol But really, really...I'm want to see Sirius's actual proposal! Anyway...I'm wishing you well and thanks for sharing your creativity with all of us! |
diamondnightskies chapter 27 . 7/17 what a lovely thing for Harry and Sirius to do, and Hermione's memories of her grandmother are so sweet! |
diamondnightskies chapter 26 . 7/17 7 stinging hexes to the crotch...awesome! Nice takedown. |
diamondnightskies chapter 25 . 7/17 Oh Luna...I'm not sure that I've seen another story where it might be that she uses her imaginary creatures to avoid talking/thinking about things that are painful. It's sad, but really interesting. |